Reviews for Of Kith and Kin
JordyR chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
'some' ! pfft *slaps face* 'some' its killing me.


I dont know what to say about this chapter, but it was very sweet. Not crazy sex god and such, but nice. :)
Thirdnlst chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
I found this story by way of the Fictionators and I am glad I did. This story is very engrossing. I think I know what is going on with Bella's pregnancy but not sure about Alice or why Edward pulled his typical EMO Edward stuff and left.

Can't wait to read more and hopefully updates comes fast. Are you going to post teasers on Fictionators and possible a picture tease on Pictease?
bemily chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
I hurt for them because I know they aren't together anymore. And I don't know why. But I think they want to be.
SabLuvsLogan chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Great update, so anxious for some answers :D
Hollzama chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Glad you continued this part ;) teehee. I don't have too much to say on this one other than I loved it!

Though in your author note at the bottom you mentioned the banner as well as more info in your profile, I didn't see it? Or maybe I just can't read?

Can't wait for more!
domen913 chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
ok. you have left me no choice. Im going to have to chain you to your computer so you can update this story everyday! im totally addicted. im with ya and can't wait to get my update alert.
TessLouise chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
As much as I'm enjoying the 'journey' of the story, I can't wait to find out what's going on. That said, I much prefer a slow and natural reveal. Looking forward to the next one!
jimemon chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
You have such a pretty writing style :)
Alby Mangroves chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
I don't even care about the answers. I feel like I'm a peeping tom, looking at these lovers through gauzy curtains, it's the best kind of agony. So beautiful.

OK, I take it back; I really REALLY want to know! lol

As always, each word considered and placed with care, everything harmonizes to make your writing so easy on the eyes and so pleasing to the mind xxx
voyanisen chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
I love the sensuality of your writing; you take smell, taste, sound, touch, and sight to poetic heights. Beautiful chapter, very sexy.

I have an idea as to Bella's pregnancy, and how it ties her to the Cullen-McCarty-Hale family, and I am very interested to not only see if I'm right, but to see what Edward's reaction will be, and if the jerk will apologize.

Thanks for the lovely chapter!
Themys chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Wow, this chapter! It starts when chapter 2 stopped, right? I can feel the power of the emotions surrounding them. STRONG.

That said, can you please put me out of my misery? I'm dying here.

Thanks for the update and thanks for this amazing story.

PS. I started BDB. Wow!

Dolphin4442 chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Damn I was so excited for some answers lol Fantastic chapter. At least we know that they used to be hot and heavy for sure. fyi I'm probably and by probably I mean I am going to start fangirling you, just wanted you to be aware lol
iremnaz chapter 4 . 8/8/2010

Dude, you're killing me! Really, you're killing me softly with this story. It's awesome and captivating and these cliffies...jeebus, even they are addictive. I just wish you could have seen my face.

Noticing the Email alerthuge smile and a bit of happy dance.

Reading the chapter updatetotally mesmerized...also hot and bothered kinda blush with a dash of drool.

Realising I'm not getting the answer that I'm dying to know in this chapterFull on Huh? look along with nail biting. And then the "ooh she is soooo good, keeping us on our toes" look with slightly narrowed eyes foolowed by speed clicking the prev button to read all 4 chapters in one sitting.

Finally after reading the story againthe faraway daydreaming look because I'm thinking about inventing a time machine to zap myself to next chapter update. :)

Dont keep us waiting too long please. I'm almost out of nails to bite and cuticles bleed like a bitch. Sorry, gross but true. See, if you dont update soon there will be blood!
thesequiettimes chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Ahh you're killing me but in the best way possible. Are The Lovers in the Garden Bella and Edward? It seems that way. Can't wait for the next piece of the puzzle.

Thanks for writing!
richinlaughter chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
Great chapter, interspersing a good memory with present angst. I hope that everything works out for B & E. Really enjoying this!
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