Reviews for Book 4: Air
Skiddy chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
OMG! this is so cute!
FireLordLOrD chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
i laughed so hard at teo walked, i am such a bad person, the rest is ok but this slip up was just hilarious
kataang0159 chapter 41 . 7/3/2015
when are you going to finish it
lupita leal chapter 23 . 6/4/2015
LOVE,...
Unstxppable chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Great chapter! I love the fluffiness!
tetragirl93 chapter 41 . 9/4/2014
Hey, this has been a great story. I know it has been a few years though if you make anymore work on this can I suggest highlighting how zuko got his dragon? Or maybe doing another book that continues the story.
Cheers Tetra
ScyrousFX chapter 41 . 7/30/2014
Too bad how you never continued this story.

Thanks though, it was enjoyable.
Guest chapter 41 . 6/15/2014
Why'd you stop updating?!
J. S. Theios chapter 41 . 6/12/2014
Please finish this story! It's been 2 years since you updated what happened?! I really want you to update this! So please update!
Guest chapter 41 . 4/29/2014
When you will make another chapter?
Bloab chapter 41 . 4/24/2014
Awesome story. I hope you finish some day!
ATLA Fan chapter 19 . 2/25/2014
The oral sex was just absolutely nasty and unnecessary. Every fanfiction has oral sex on here! Why?! I was actually kinda happy to see regular sex and not oral sex. It's just something that Katara should and would never do! You pretty much accurately depicted Aang and Katara right up until that moment. I was so disappointed. It kinda ruined the whole story for me. From then on, I viewed Katara as a nasty slut; at least in your story. And it was absolutely horrible. It turned from a beautiful, awesome, amazing, Avatar story into a nasty, dirty, Avatar porno; with Katara, one of the cleanest girls in the whole show with the best morals depicted as a dirty whore. Oral sex is nasty especially between Aang and Katara, husband and wife, not to mention that they are clean people with morals and values. Then actually kissing again? That's nasty! I would never ask my wife to do that to me and I would never do that to my wife. I just had to get it out there.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/23/2014
Excellent story and brilliant creative writing
Brickgirl101 chapter 41 . 11/26/2013
OH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GODOH MY GOD! agh I really want more please! Update!
Brickgirl101 chapter 38 . 11/26/2013
Beginning of this chapter made me cry... Yikes Im almost to chapter41 and you haven't updated since 2011... I really hope you will continue this soon i am really enjoying this story!
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