Reviews for Monster
SchonKaputt chapter 10 . 4/19/2011
it's starting to sound more like slade and raven.
SchonKaputt chapter 9 . 4/19/2011
the name of the chapter is a song because?
NeonSyzygy chapter 16 . 9/1/2010
wow. that was totally amazing. one of the best rob/rae fics that i have read. great job.
momsabbysusingtheforce71 chapter 16 . 8/28/2010
I'm sorry, but I don't really like the RobRae pair...
Necronom Hezberek Mortix chapter 16 . 8/12/2010
Oh my gosh this story was so great!

I loved the ending especially!

But i thnk the fight/confrontation scene was too short. All that building up to a short "battle" with slade.
blacklightangel chapter 16 . 8/11/2010
really really loved your story! and the ending is great! its almost sad that its over! keep writing!
Red X chapter 15 . 8/9/2010
Only two more to go? Thats sad, but Im anxious to know what happens with Raven.
blacklightangel chapter 14 . 8/8/2010
love triangles r the best! well actually love pantagons r (like in Inuyasha) but love triangles are still rank up there! great chapter!
Cori chapter 13 . 8/6/2010
OOOOOOOOO

Update!
Red X chapter 13 . 8/5/2010
Like I said, time to replace Cyborg. So, will have another twist? I want see that.
blacklightangel chapter 12 . 8/4/2010
i made it 16 minutes too late but my lame mother wuz being the lame mother that she is and just HAD to keep me off the computer for absolutely no reason. so HAPPY 16 MINUTE LATE BIRTHDAY! and btw awesome chap!
Lilith003 chapter 11 . 8/4/2010
Your story is amazing ! I lovelovelove it ! It only had a few minor errors that i noticed . Spelling errors , character flaws , like i said, small things . Other than that , it was fantastic ! You clearly have a lot of writing skills and potential . How did you get the idea for this story ?
Red X chapter 11 . 8/3/2010
Finally Raven is reacting. Happy birthday!
blacklightangel chapter 11 . 8/3/2010
love it! update soon please! and btw i didnt know you were a bleach fan. i just said that cuz I'M obsessed with bleach. lolz. happy early birthday btw! (see i remembered your birthday! can barely remember MY birthday so feel special!) xD
blacklightangel chapter 10 . 8/2/2010
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *hands u big cake made by Orihime* can you guess wut my present to you is? its this review! i love your story! and btw you'd have ta be a Bleach fan to know who Orihime is and why she wuz he 1 who made the cake :P
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