Reviews for Clumsy
Kaley chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
CUTE! *squee*
TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
It was really cute and I could see this happening. Nicely done!

-Charmy
anonymous633 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Awwwwwwwwww... That's so cuuuuuuuuuuuute...l loved it :)
chele the original chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
good job!
Pazithia.Gallifreya chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
:-D
Pazithia.Gallifreya chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
:-D
Slash Inc chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
This was AWESOME! I thought you did a great job and your descriptions and wording were not over work and flowed beautifully.
miss-volturi-princess chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
LLLLLOOOOVVVEEEE! *squeals* A great peice of fanfiction right there
scientia-potentia-est chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Awww, this is sooo cute and sweet! I really think you got the characterisation spot on, and I could easily visualize what was happening. And the dialogue was just perfect! Their insults which are actually complements, and the way they both said 'i love you' was just perfecctt :D Loved it! xxx
Aurora Apocolypta chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Awwwwww so cute :3
AmazonWariorPrincess chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Kay, I have a secret. You can't tell anyone... I've never actually watched Merlin before! :S I just watched some clips on youtube that some awesome people put up and even *I* could see the sexual tension goin' on there! So I just had to fic it and lucky me that I found this one first because this was bloody AWESOME! :D So thank's so much for posting and making my very first Merlin fic experience great! :D

~Love, AWPrincess :D
chorus chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
You nailed it! Looks, personalities, conversations - I could actually *see* it happening with my mind's eye.

Obligatory tip: consider using "tusselled" instead of "tasselled" - dictionary says that tusselled is a better descriptive (even if I can't spell either word correctly).

This is a keeper, and it's so darn CUTE! :) :) :)
The King's Perpetual Check chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
It is cute.

I do love the show Merlin!
fangirlbynight chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I loooove clumsy Merlin. Gosh, he's so adorable. And I liked Arthur's mushy confession, because you have to have a mushy Arthur confession. I think it's a rule. I dunno, it always makes me smile though ;] This was the right amount of awkward and hot and fluffy all mixed together. Until the next ;]
VampiressBlack chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Aww this was sweet! I love how Arthur kind of babbled about all of things he notices about Merlin that make him like him. It was cute! I can definitly see them like this, the slip of the emotion from Arthur and the "oi prat. I love you too" so it character! loved it lots!

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