damn that was crazy fucking good. ending made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

I just finished reading the whole story for the first time, it was a great story now in the words of Diana hours the expressed opinion is just my own, I think there were way too many major character deaths only because I would have liked to see their stories expanded but I understand everything and have a happy ending, the only other thing I was really hoping for at the very end was to do like a flash forward to where Shepherd was really old and he had just passed away and the last thing we read or hear is Garrus saying "Shepard" sitting at the bar waiting for him.

Great way to end the story.

Twelve years...the chills from the thought alone man. I still can't believe you finished it without resorting to rushing it. That was a damn good ride. Truly the best.

Sir, my eyes water as I must tell you: It was a damn good ride…no…the best. o7

Found this story at the beginning of the year and read it all! It was a great ride! Thank you for finishing it!

It’s been a hell of a ride and I’ve been here since basically the beginning and I’ve enjoyed every single word along the way and though I’m sad my favorite story has reached its conclusion I want to say it’s been an absolute pleasure of mine to read your work and to tell you that you’re an amazing writer and most importantly to say thank you this story has been a constant in my life and helped me through some difficult times and all I can say is thank you and even I feel that isn’t enough congratulations on making what I consider a masterpiece

This is the kind of vigilantism I wish existed in our world on a consistent basis.

Party, Sex, Fireworks: An awesome ending if it is one. I’ll admit…the smut in this chapter REALLY made me want to ravish the wife over here. But it being 4AM and her being asleep would make that a safety hazard. XD

It’s ok, Jack. I feel that pain too as my 3.5-month-old would rather cry than just go to sleep at times.

Enjoyed this story so much! Thank you!

“There is no higher power dictating who lives and who dies”

Well how the turntables. Not sure if this is the finale but it’s been fun

We may not be able to change the past, but once we learn that we can move on from it, life becomes that much easier. This chapter was amazing!

Great story. I'm glad it isn't abandoned.

nice firefly reference!