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  dave chapter 34 . 5/2/2013 Loving this, keep it coming. You have captured the way Jack's personality grew in the game wonderfully. |
 Count Kulalu chapter 34 . 5/2/2013 Well this chapter shows that the story is progressing well. Although, I'm left wondering how the hell did Cerberus manage to not only assassinate presidents, but the Pope? Also, does this mean Jack won't be in her ME3 outfit? Or is it just later she wears it? |
| NightfableLM chapter 34 . 5/2/2013 Finn, you are on a roll! :D This morning, I woke up to find out a new chapter was out! *happy dance* Have you played the Citadel DLC? If you did, how did you find it? My email is if you feel like chatting about Jack. I can't wait for your next chapter! Thank you for continuing this great story! |
| Dracconnis chapter 34 . 5/2/2013 Excellent as always! |
| lazyguy90 chapter 34 . 5/2/2013 Great work on this. |
| NightfableLM chapter 33 . 5/1/2013 Loving it! You know how much I love this story... This cheered my day up! |
| Dracconnis chapter 33 . 4/30/2013 Loved it! Excellent work |
| Janizary chapter 33 . 4/30/2013 Love the interviews. At least Grunt didn't say he was hungry. That might have started a shoot out :D Also loved the Jack/Anderson interaction. Very nice. Stage setting for this chapter was also well done. |
| lazyguy90 chapter 33 . 4/30/2013 So great to see this updated. Keep up the excellent work. |
| Janizary chapter 32 . 4/29/2013 Lol. Just had to throw that in at the end, didn't you, Jack? :D |
| Dracconnis chapter 32 . 4/29/2013 Ahahahahahahah! Loved it! |
| jfk chapter 32 . 4/29/2013 love it |
| necro-wulf chapter 31 . 4/26/2013 The no ex-marine lines, you know some Marines, don't you? That sort of line is pretty well only know by buffs, marines, and those who've mentioned it to one or the other. Pretty good work getting Jack to the Grissom Academy, very smooth. It meshes well with the narrative with her Amps frying her neurology. I also like the little bridge you did between ME3's visions and Morinth's brain ghost. Have you played the Citadel DLC for 3? Jack Gets a Varren. With Biotics. Named Eezo. It is hyper-aggressive. Also, a Shepard clone and a pretty entertaining party with everybody. When (not if, you have after all come this far) you get that deep into 3, it should be something to look into. |
| Dracconnis chapter 31 . 4/26/2013 Excellent as always |
| Dragonjek chapter 31 . 4/25/2013 Don't worry, Jack. Shepard is too hardcore to keel over just because some Batarians are out for his head. An outstanding transition to ME3. I look forwards to seeing what you'll do with it. |