You... are awesome. I love you for this. Best Jack/Shepard fic that I've seen yet. Please, please, keep it up.

Girl scout cookies. Oh, Gawd, that was priceless.

Their love is problamatic your story most certainly isnt. I absolutely love it, been reading it for a week now, jack/jack has always been my fav couple, and you really did an amazing job here, greetz

Gotta say, I haven't read very many Mass Effect stories written with the amount of care and overall quality as this. Definitely one of the best (Though not THE best, mind you). Keep up the good work, and thanks for providing the community with your wonderful piece of writing.

this was a neat discovery, great story

"I metaphorically banged..." - That literally had me sliding off my chair in laughter.

Like how you changed up the mission composition a bit and the expanded dialog (of course!).

And Liara's comment about where Shep's mind went to was priceless.

Excellent work as always!loved it

Yahoo! Another update! :D

Aaand Liara takes over as the new Shadow Broker! We've all known this in the DLC, but the way you write your fics it's just such a treat to read! And YES, so your Liara is in love with Shep! Ha ha... he is soo irresistible!

I'm so exited about what's gonna happen next! Arrival is still up and I can't wait to see what you make of it. Maybe the council is not so convinced about the reaper threat and Arrival will open their eyes? Or maybe it will bite Shep in the *ss and question his sanity. Either way I'm eagerly waiting for your next update! Whatever you make of it will definitely be better than Bioware's version!

Until next time...

Very entertaining. I like how the casual conversation took place.

Mordin with a 'frilly' drink. Ha! All that was missing was for him to be wearing a Hawaiian shirt ;)

"Can the two of you PLEASE have this conversation another time?"

That car chase just made the LotSB mission. Adding in the banter between Shep and Jack was priceless. :D

Just great as always. :D Love the high tension and the trio yelling at each other in the skycar, especially Liara recalling the horrors of the Mako.

Yahoo! Another update! :D Thanks a million, man!

I am eagerly following your fic. Good to see you covering the DLCs of Mass Effect 2. I just hope Jack doesn't get separated and out of the squad like in ME3: that really pissed me off. I'm eager to see what you do with the story. I approve of your addition of Jack's degrading physical condition: it's kinda inevitable after all. And as far as I can understand your Shep, he's not the kind of guy to surrender to the Alliance for six months for an almost certain death in court martial. That part in ME3 really pissed me.

Anyways, keep up the good work. two more things: one, plz this can't be the end of Ash! :P Lol, when I give you an extensive review I'll tell you how amazing job you did in putting her in the story. But really, plz don't forget to keep her in the picture: she's the one who doesn't give up easily, anyway! And another one is, someone can't just be your good friend to endanger his/her life and go against impossible odds to rescue your corpse! Lol, I always thought Liara was by default always fell in love with Shepard. What's your thought in this? :P

Ok, before I drone on any more I should just sign off!

Have a good day!

Kudos!an excellent update

Awesome chapter. I cant wait for the next update. I hope you do an ending rewrite for this story. Keep the awesomness coming.

Glad to see you're still at it with this. Thought you might be one of the FF writers that fell victim to the ME3 despair.