Wooot! 8D This is one magnificent fic ( you bastard, i've read the books too!) It's narrative is cool, it tightly follows the"universal" ME plot ( with some cool twists on the way) and overall we get a pretty rich and deep inside-look at Shepard, Jack and other Characters. I've Re-he-he-heally enjoyed it and recommend for any Shepard slash Jack fan or Mass Effect Fan in general.

Btw- that President nickname thingy was pretty smart and funny too lol,and i think paragon Shepard would NEVER go that low for some "meat sack" IMHO. /

Oh hell yeah! The past couple of chapters just keep getting better. You're doing a great job of ramping up the action. I like that it's set in Hyderabad too- always nice to find a story with a bit of worldly knowledge in it.

Great chapter man!

Great chapter!

Yay, chapter update!

First: The string that starts with "Listen to me you snivelling little son of a bitch I have had an absolute...". OMG, I was actually laughing to hard (and trying to not scare my staff) that I was crying and couldn't breath! loller-freaking-copters all around!

Second: "You want to chain up the Captain? Kinky." - Perfect Kasumi!

Third: I was expecting Randall Flagg for some reason... ;)

Looking forward to more.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

~~CloudGazer15

Wow. Trapped with Ash? Falling from 90-storey skyscraper? Harsh meeting with Jack and just as harsh parting? HANNAH SHEPARD AND FULL FUCKING DREADNOUGHT?

You centanly make my day.

Your making me so sad T_T

wonderful story [:

Found this story a bit late, but finished through CH21 today. Like the creative changes in canon through the end of ME2. Made for more dramatic scenes in some places (in particular the 'Morinth' mission!).

The initial drop-off into "f'em" by Shepard after the Citadel was a bit jarring, but I'm settling into it a bit better. I think Garrus might have been a bit more "WTF, Shepard?", but that's just my own interpretation of their relationship ;)

Very much like how you handled the Shep/Tali convergence. I'm glad you chose to go that route, rather than have her affections crushed. "Little Sis" indeed!

Finally, CH21. Jack's final epiphany about her feeling and connection to Shepard (right after tearing apart the tank); loved it. Your portrayal of her thoughts was consistently different after that point. Well done!

Subscribed and looking forward to the next chapter.

They actually treid an infiltration.

Dumbest thing I ever heard, I would just have levelled the area with one Thanix Cannon bolt or disruptor torpedo and been done with it. Screw collateral, some people don't deserve to live

Great chapter! Damn. You'd have to be extremely foolish to take on Jack... Thanks for writing this. God bless!

Mm, good work with the biotic combat.

Also, KasumiRiver Tam? ICWUTUDIDTHAR

Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

~~CloudGazer15

Heh, I guess Jack probably shouldn't visit Earth again in the near or far future.

Good to see her willing to fight for their love instead of simply walking away though.