Reviews for Standstill
eveyssoul chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
This is simply beautiful, thank you! I too mourn for lost time. It's part of life I guess.
darklover chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Beautfil fic. I loved it.
xxGuardianxx chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Excellent imagery and description.
Miss Bunnie Chan chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
that was lovely :)
kicyslawa chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I don't know what to say.

thoughts... I couldn't thing while reading this. At that moment I was watching a very intimate scene and sank in it.

Usually, I say 'It could be longer" but here, you had perfect timing. Otherwise it'd be boring if it was longer. You managed to finish it in a perfect way.

Love it!
DarcyLowther chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Goku's Daughter chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Ah you're so amazing.

I loved it. I love scars too. XD I love how you wrote it! I love your writing.

Is the three scars on her belly from "Kaien's" Trident?

Anyways, I liked how you portrayed the beautiful couple. I like the introspection of the scars and the way he kisses her.

I reeeeeeeeallly liked this line:

/One can only dream of being a world-changer, but that is rare in itself. It cannot be decided, or planned… how the gears of fate and destiny work are mysterious, unknowable./

I too wait to be someone's world-changer.

Sorry if my review doesn't make sense. I've been drinking. LOL


Agatha-Naomi chapter 1 . 7/17/2010