|Reviews for This Young Prawn of Mine|
| buba chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
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| sunkissedvampire chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
very interesting, I'm enjoying it so far, keep up the good work and please update soon XD
| Underground Homesick Alien chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I LOVED IT! This is a great beginning! The story has a really cool action-style "voice" to it-I love how the story just flows along. Lenny talking to Thomas about getting drunk and Cat Food/Thomas explaining about his job/how he knows where South Africa is/his scars, really make the characters special. When Thomas said, 'I have not taken part in that sort of practice.', you really got (in my opinion) the sort of formal way a person (or especially an alien) would use a foreign language. It makes for a great contrast between him and Lenny. They're really strong characters that I can easily imagine.
This chapter covers a ton and has a bunch of great parts to it. It made me think, too. I can't wait to read what happens next. Very fun to read and great writing!