Reviews for Love and Levirate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful. Alistair's and Anora's interactions were stellar. Anora, withdrawn, bound, and harden. Alistair, naïve, kind and just an absolute adorable dork. My favorite playthroughs have always had Alistar as king with Anora as his wife, and I wondered how such a relationship would develop, and this fic nails what I'd imagine and then some. Well done, from first word to last I was thoroughly captured by this story. Taking place between the end of origins and awakening, these little snap shots of these two growing used to each other, establishing a relationship slowly were awesome. Marvelous work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely lovely. Wonderfully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. Their relationship developed organically, which is greatly appreciated. Both characters were very consistent with the game as well. Very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello here! I noticed I still hadn't finish your fic, so i came back for more, as it was really a pleasure to read. I really like this chapter. The scene with Lanaya is great and interesting, plus it depicts well the evolution of Anora and Alistair's relationship. The last part is a little sad but the only think I thought reading this was "No caresses or any kind of preparation?" Yes, I know, I have strange priorities. Anyway, thanks again for your fanfiction ! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been weeks since I last read your fic and I always told myself that it deserves a review. Took me too long but better late than never. I didn't marry Alistair to Anora in the game but I'm curious on how the relationship would work. I looked for fanfics and I'm glad I stumbled on this one. You wrote Alistair wonderfully, his humor, his vulnerability, his ability to take on tragedies in his life. I must say that I also liked how you wrote Anora. While in the game she's ambitious and hungry for power, she is someone who genuinely cares for Ferelden. Thanks for this fic and it's better than my expectations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is this story not in my favorite yet? I don't know but hey, problem solved Anyway, I realy liked that story, kind of feel realistic. (or as ralistic as it could be when talking about a video game) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never saw Alistair and Anora together, but this story was brilliantly written that it seemed only natural that their relationship would actually progress like this. Love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anora sounds like kind of a bitch here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The second chapter is also very good. It's intersting to notice the choice you made into the game are displayed clearly here. The fact of Alistair behind not able to rule alone for now is very important to the story, or so I think. Maybe that's one of the reasons Eammon looks so eager to push him on the throne. As it would make him in a good position to influence the king, depsite his best intentions, it looks kind of interested of him. Personally, I like him but I understand how the way he acts at Denerim sounded strange. Well, thanks for the reading anyway ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello there! I really liked the idea of Anora and Alistair's life after their wedding, so I read your fanafiction and I'm glad I did. I like the fact you choose the point of view of Anora, and how you depicted her too. She is an intersting women, and I was kind of sad that you don't see her more in the different games of the saga Dragon Age. So thanks for the reading! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. That was... disturbingly dark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so *sweet* and you managed to keep both Alistair and Anita in-character. I'm too used to reading fics of a heartbroken and bitter King Alistair so this was a refreshing change. I'll be sure to read the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful. Thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. I love how Alistair is so sweet and Anora is tough as nails but they come together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just found this, I like it :) |