|Reviews for Checkmate|
| AlpacaCokelat chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This is hot... Ahshvsusbdksh omg
| benxkevin196 chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
| Shizuka no Taisho chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Sex. And hotness. And OMFG, SO DAMN HOT.
| Kobugi chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Heheheh, Izayaaa, such a tease (;
And the link does work, haha. Just remove the spaces before and after each slash ( / ) mark and replace the words '.' with an actual dot ( a period ). _
Sexy Izaya-kun. Whewt
| EmoKitty1213 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
it was a great story...also the link didn't work
| koi.no.michi chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
that. was. so. HOTTTTTTTTT
i actually died from this
one of my favorite fics EVER
i can totally see izaya doing that to shizuo
in, out, nip , suck
haha he's such a tease
thanx so much
it was PERFECT 3
| Sarah32138 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
that was awesome...soooo sexy. Izaya you tease! LOL guess you got what you wanted.
Btw I couldn't get the picture to work :( perhaps could send it to me or something?
| Allen.Nara chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
this was totally yummy, as well as the pic! -w-
very nice work!
| anon azure chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I LOVE THIS
but I can't see the pic...
little help please?
| Dualsky chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Totally needs a sequal this time shizu-chan has the advantage huh? *wink wink* or maybe Izaya-kun can be jel. or something. ne?
Anyway LOVED IT (V)-b
| TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
wow!...h.o.t, it is burning hoootttt!...totally love it!..Izaya is such a teasing bastard...but i am sure that Shizuo does not mind it too much!..._
| OnlyIntuition chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
I can totally see why the picture is one of your favorites xD (It just became one of mine too). Love this fic xD Izaya definitely WOULD do that lolol. So cute xD and not to mention HOT :D *heart*
| Raekah chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
OHMIGOD. Okay, that was hot ;D. In so many ways. Not a very good review as much as it is compliments on your writing!
| MyraHellsing chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
that was yummy X3
And that picture too i can see how u got that idea... XD
after reading that fanfic, i don't think i can look at a lolipop (or eat one!) without giggling.. w
good job with the smutt scene too
| MeLoNnAiSE chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Lollipops can be scary... eheheh ;P
That was awesomely hot and sexy - exactly what I was looking for XD I love how you described the way Izaya licked... certain things, and the slight teasing with the bites were delicious ;]
Pointers: do spell-checks! The language mistake interrupts the flow of the story, even though they can be looked over. Not that much of a problem, but a nice one if it could be solved _
Keep writing! This fic made my day! XDD
ps. Oh god, now I will start seeing lollipops the wrong way all over again. ;P