Reviews for The Lost Letter of Sir Daniel Fortesque
ToaGaimZXA chapter 1 . 4/1
A deep and good story you have written. It definitely show Dan true character and nobility.
The Mystic Doctor chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I find it interesting that Daniel still finds himself worthy to fight for his people even though he admits that he deceived them. It seems to show that in the end, he thinks more of their well-being than his own. I would have expected more guilt coming from him, truthfully, but this portrayal is very good too.
Nocturnal-Dayz chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Hmm, it was a bit short, but sweet. I myself felt that Sir Dan felt a bit of guilt before the day of his death and wanted to make it up to the people somehow. I like how you stuck with the Sir Dan in the original version of the game (the would-be hero who wants to prove himself) as opposed to the campy, cowardly version of him in the Resurrection version. I think you could have expanded a little bit on this idea and added a bit more emotion, but since this is a letter it's probably a good thing you kept it on the shorter side. Again, short but sweet.
deathleader chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
wow just wow this put's another spin on things