Reviews for Naruto The Next Generation
niki1248 chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
hey sarah great story so far. i can't wait for the next few chapters. your gonna be a great writer some day. keep it up.
niki1248 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
hey the first chapter was great. keep it up. you are going to be a great writer one day. love ya
xXPOPPXx chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
i dont think it sucked! i actually enjoyed it thank you very much...

and woot! B ranked mission :) that should be exciting
xXPOPPXx chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
i have come to a conclusion:

i am completley interested in this story :P too late to back out now. I like how Naruto is still sort of like his old self but still mature at the same time. :) Keep up the good work.

PNL7 out
xXPOPPXx chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Aw not kabuto! I really dislike that guy.

I think it was cute how koicji likes sora and I enjoyed this chapter so I hope you keep writing :)
xXPOPPXx chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
wow i like this story, but i coulda sworn i skipped a paragraph or two :P im just tired. reread it tmrw.

word of advise:

in the beginning you switched from thirt to first a few times. i think its cuz this story might've started out as a first person or something and then you changed it, so just bringing it to your attention. it didnt really bother me.
Psycho-Jellybean chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
hey that was really good can you plz write another chapter soon ? ty x