|Reviews for What If?|
| Lexy chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Gah! I seriously want to sgove both of them in a room and tell them "make up now and if you two end of hurting eachother I'll hurt you both!"
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
JOhn sure did get lucky in his motel that time. Sam should have left a note.
| 123kat chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Oh why can't those Winchesters ever get over their pride. Loved the story, you captured them so well. Keep up the great writing.
| KayValo87 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Great story, I could really see this happening.
One thing though, as I got to the end, I couldn't help but wonder how Dean would react to this.
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
| rog457 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Obviously the set up for the story is highly implausable, but strange coinsidences do happen everyday and its not impossible that Sam might have caught sight of Johns truck in that motel parking lot.
I love that both of them are too stubborn or maybe too scared to make the first move at reconciliation, so sure that the other wouldnt want it. They are so much alike and dont even realize it.
I always wondered if John would occasionally find himself in California and wander by the Stanford campus just to see if a certain tall, hazel-eyed student was doing ok.
That was a lovely story and so very in character for both Sam and John.
| RedDragen chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I would love to see them catch up and find out what really happend to Sam
| Madebyme chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I'm so pleased you're writing again and what a way to come back! Awesome fic!
This fit so nicely into canon. Knowing from Dean that John stopped by to check on Sam and that the two didn't officially meet until Shadow. And I loved the idea that despite his own injuries, Sam took care of his Dad, his presence silent but John can see the signs around the room.
Neat ending too, with John wanting to repay the favour and watch over Sam in hospital but missing his chance. True Winchester luck there and it really fits with the show and lack of communication that seems to be a Winchester trait!
And what a lovely touch with John seeing that Jess and Sam were going to be more than friends. I really liked that. I'm so pleased to have you back and I wish you luck with your other fics! Great read and thanks for sharing. Take care, Abbi
| BranchSuper chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Good story, but so sad the both Sam and John fear that the other would not want them near.
| supernatfem76 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
I did enjoy this. You did a great job writing for both John and Sam. I look forward to continuing to read your other stories when the muse strikes again. Until then take care.
| NetMyne01 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
It's no wonder that Dean always say that Sam is so much alike like their father, you've just showed it again. Loved this story, thank you so much for sharing it!
| MysteryMadchen chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Haven't lost your touch girl, no way! What a great and sad story. Sam wanting to help his father and then John wanting the same, but neither one willing to let the other know they were there. Fit's perfectly with the story and their personalities. I'm just glad that John found out it was in fact Sam that helped him. Great Job, Gill. Can't wait for the rest of your stories to make a comeback. Thanks Nicole.
| vonnie836 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
This was wonderful. I loved how Sam went to see his dad even though he was injured. Sure he thought Dean would be there too, but still. And when he found him injured, he didn't think twice and helped. Poor kid wore himself out and collapsed. And there was no doubt in John's mind, who the expressive, gentle and courteous young man they were talking about was. Too bad, he didn't make contact, but he obviously saw Jess and he decided to be there in other ways. Great story. Can't wait for you to put up more of your others again. Hugs, Vonnie
| romirola chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Awesome fic, just loved it and so happy to see the alert from you in my inbox this morning!
You got Sam and John both so well there and though I was really glad that John found out through the maids' conversation that Sam had been there and tended to him, it was sad that he thought Sam left maybe because he didn't want to face him and sad too that John couldn't make the move at the hospital when his youngest left with Jess. The fact that Sam tended to his dad when he himself was injured and almost beyond his endurance should show John that Sam loved him, and if he thought about it, it was probably his parting words when Sam left that prevented him staying until John woke up, not sure of what his reaction would be.
Great read, totally in character and it really showed their relationship but you can also see how much they love each other and care.