Reviews for A Beautiful Lie
opens up 4 nobody chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Dear god I love this story... I haven't read a good L/Light story in a while. This is amazing, I tried to read it as slowly as possible for maximum enjoyment can't wait for the next.

-opens up 4 nobody-
Sashocirrione chapter 19 . 5/30/2011
It was nice to see them make out!
Wokki chapter 19 . 3/13/2011
I actually read all 19 chapters without breaks and ended up spending few hours but do I regret using my time? My answer is simple, no. Every hour, minute, second I spent reading this fic was just pure enjoyment. This story is really interesting from first part to 19th chapter. It is really interesting to follow Raitos and Ryuzakis relationship, how it grows and what kind of relationship it becomes to. I am looking forward to see more chapters of this fic and how the story ends, wondering if it is going to be the same as the official one.

I noticed that you wrote "I hope that this chapter wasn't boring" and "My english might not be so good" or something like that, in the end of almost every chapter. CherrySugarCube do not worry if it was boring because it was never boring! Not for even 1 second. And your english, gosh, it was perfect! I couldn't tell if you were foreign or not. So don't worry sweety!

I am going to read your other stories too, after reading story like this its a MUST. I don't personally have any experiences with short stories but this opened my eyes, this story made me want to read more, a lust for short stories.

I kinda feel honored to know you in real life. It is just suprising how many things you can do, and you exceed in everything. Your personality is awesome too. You're really gifted person :)

Sorry this review was kinda plain. It was because I didnt want to review the plot so much because I don't want to spoil this great story, they better read and absorb the story. It gives more pleasure and joy.
Corsac Fox chapter 19 . 3/5/2011
They're so.. cuteeeeeh~! Light and L, I mean. Okay, L at least.

" L put his hands into the pockets of his jeans. "No, it didn't mean anything", he replied monotonously. "

I can imagine that one! So sweet in a way. :'3 They are denying the inevitable there. Oh, I can't wait to see when the others learn what has developed between L and Light~

And sorry about a crappy comment!

Xoxo

~ CF
Haruna Shikaio chapter 19 . 2/27/2011
ahhh, i like this! it's not intense, it's just right _ i dont like the graphic porno nastyness *bleck* *sticks tongue out* i would love to read the next chapter!
Vega Nightshade chapter 19 . 2/26/2011
I think that this chapter was actually quite good... :) And I was always, from the beginning, after L and Light being more than friends. Simply because in my opinion, geniuses like them would have to be drawn to each other in more than one way.

And I like the cofusion it causes them, more on Light's side though. It's more realistic than, like in some stories, both of them just jumping each other and being all loving and caring after stating in their minds that they're somehow attracted...

So, good job and I'm waiting for another update! :D
Sashocirrione chapter 18 . 1/22/2011
I have the feeling that Misa could be a lot of trouble. L seems to be much easier at keeping the secret than Light is.
TheOrchid chapter 18 . 1/16/2011
This fic is so cute . Poor L, though... Can't wait to see more fluff, please update soon.
Hyper Kid007 chapter 18 . 1/14/2011
Your being so mean to Matsui! Love how you interpret Lights and Ls relationship.

Can't wait for more,

Hyper Kid007.
Corsac Fox chapter 17 . 11/29/2010
Yeyyy~~ :''3

An eye for an eye. I liked that.

"Light-kun and I, we have absolutely no intention of getting married."

And this.. this is something so hilarious. I'm writing this in a library so.. I hope no-one thinks I'm crazy. I laughed aloud it was so perfect~ Poor L, he really should learn to understand metaphors better.

Sorry about the short comment, I'm in a little hurry.

XOXO

~ CF
Mary Lou chapter 17 . 11/25/2010
Sigh...It was only a dream. Poor L needs a few or many lessons in the romance department. Leave it to Matsuda to interrupt at the worst times. Will our boys ever get together?
Basia Orci chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
Omg, sexual tension. Stupid Matsuda! Why must you interrupt the best moments?

Anyway, great chapter!
Sashocirrione chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
This is a very cute make-out scene in this chapter.
Sashocirrione chapter 13 . 11/21/2010
A very good kiss in this chapter, and L seems more experienced than Light.

I'm glad you got back to original material after a few more chapters of nearly-identical-to-canon.
Sashocirrione chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
Actually it wasn't in Misa's apartment that the Yotsuba men had that party, but in a hotel suite.
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