|Reviews for Banshee|
| Prinzessin Mia chapter 6 . 2/28
I love this story! Totally rooting for Scarecrow/Banshee. Can't wait for the next update! (:
| AsaraSahara chapter 6 . 1/31
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/18
Please please please please please update!
| ScaryCrow chapter 6 . 9/17/2014
This story is so awesome. Please update it!
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/18/2014
You HAVE to continue this story! It's so good and your write Scarecrow so perfectly!
| RayWolf16 chapter 6 . 3/29/2014
I do hope that you'll continue this story, it' really good!
| brpetal chapter 6 . 3/18/2014
| Frosty Autumn chapter 6 . 2/8/2014
Not fair! NOT FAIR! D: I read this far only to find out that the story hasn't been updated in over three years? It can't stop here, it just can't! Please say you'll come back to finish this, it feels too exciting of an idea to just abandon.
I absolutely love the "ghost" angle. It's so unique, no one's ever done that before in a "suddenly sucked into Batman video game" story, and it's an original enough idea that not many people would have thought of it in the first place. You really set yourself apart from the others in this way, as most other stories just follow a very linear survive-the-game-for-real-this-time path. And then that's it, no effort to really to do anything else besides recreate the game, now only with a new character. But with the way that you did it, your character's in-game situation is unique enough that I really enjoy finding familiar places of the game through her eyes.
Another thing that I love is Melanie's realistic approach to problem solving! Not once did I chastise her in my head saying, "You idiot! Don't go in there/Why are doing that/Are you serious?!". I can't stand it when authors have their characters make incredibly stupid decisions just to make the plot go where they want with as little hassle as possible. Clearly they have no concept of self-preservation. But it's clear that Melanie does, and I love it!
I really like the details in the writing. It's not passive, it's all very in the moment and given time to be described. I can feel when Melanie's hurt, when she's scared, when she's crying. If you continue the story, I'd love for you to keep this up!
The only lesser thing that I'm a little critical about in this story is the romance subplot. I'm pretty iffy on it, I feel like it doesn't belong here, like it's an ill-fitting shoe but you're still trying it on anyway. The story simply as a survival adventure is fantastic, it totally works, and it's enough to carry the narrative all the way to the end. The romance angle feels like something that would bog it down a little bit.
I don't mean to sound at all cruel to your story, or what you had planned for it, I really am enjoying myself (greatly), but I don't feel at all excited about the promised romance part.
Now that I've said all that, you can throw this all away if you wish, because at the end of the day, this is your story. I'm no professional writer, just an amateur like most of us here, I just know what I like xD
Please say you'll continue this. I mean I know it's been a couple years already, it may be unlikely, interests change and perhaps you lost some steam along the way while writing, but I honestly hope you get that spark again soon. Until then, I happily await that alert telling me that Chapter 7 has been uploaded :D Take care
| lunabloodmoon666 chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
awwwww love this and hope to read more soon :)
| Azailia chapter 6 . 11/9/2013
oh my goodness do I love this story so much. Scarecrow is just such a great character I cannot even. I like Banshee too, and this story is very nice, I like it a lot Can't wait to see more in the future
| DevilToBeLoved chapter 6 . 7/6/2013
I'm sad to see that this hasn't been updated in a long time, but I genuinely find this to be my own personal dose of cocaine, and I hope to read more soon!
| takara410 chapter 6 . 6/4/2013
| therussianbookworm chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
I. LOVE. This. Story. You've got to finish this!
| Tsuki Ai chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Ahaha, Jonathon's a pervert! Well, sort of. And apparently NOT humble lol. Even though I always seem to enjoy Scarecrow and Mels' interactions, I can't wait for her to either meet up Batman or break out. :) I also hope that you update this story.. It's such a shame, it's so addicting and an awesome read, but it hasn't been updated for so long..
| Tsuki Ai chapter 5 . 4/3/2013
WOW. Finally! Even though I said she better not get caught by Scarecrow, I've been anticipating when she would meet him! I almost had goosebumps from reading that scene where Scarecrow corners her, but then I burst out laughing when she kicked him in the crotch. Pretty sure I haven't read that ever happening to Jonathon, lol.