|Reviews for It Started With A Kiss|
| TransBoyLeviAckerman chapter 5 . 4/10/2015
CHILD WHAT YOU CAN'T DO THIS YOU CAN NOT DO THIS NO NO NO NO DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING HERE WHAT THE HECK OH MY GOD THERE'S NO MORE CHAPTERS AFTER THIS OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I UNDERSTAND LEAVING A STORY CAUSE YOU'RE BORED, BUT DON'T LEAVE IT AFTER SOMETHING SO BIG HAPPENS LIKE WHAT THE HELL YOU HAVE READERS WHO ARE COUNTING ON YOU *muffled sobs*
I feel like if I spammed you, you would probably get anoyed so I will probably just send a review and recomend this story to other people so their reviews can acumilate into one large spam of anxious readers.
| TransBoyLeviAckerman chapter 4 . 4/10/2015
I had to hold my breath a lot in this chapter.
Its like 2 am, so I couldn't wake everyone up with my laughter XDDD
It was so hilarious.
BUT OH MY GOD. I HAD PLAYED ALMOST ALL THE KH GAMES EXCEPT DDD AND I HAVEN'T BEAT ALL OF BBS EITHER, and I had kind of already watched the cutscenes to 356 days cause the makers couldn't be bothered to put the actual game on 1.5 remix. But my older brother finally found the actual 358 days game (they're hard to find at regular game shops I guess?) And so I had just beat it. And I cried and just felt so empty for a while. Then I started a new account on KH2 (except this would be my first time playing the Final Mix version. It had been years since I played the original). And I just recently (like yesterday) got to right before you go into the big white doors. And just... I could not handle the feels. I want to asume that you've already played KH2, but just incase you haven't, I won't go into detail about what actually made me cry the most and left me drown in my tears of sorrow cause even though I already played the game before, it was before I had even played 358 days. I had no idea who Axel was, really. Only that he was in Chain of memories in the beggining (I never beat it, I only recently watched the cutscenes on YouTube XD). And so I was oh so very confused. But when I started again, everything just killed me and I just didn't know what to do AT ALL.
Whoa sorry for the rant XD
Well, on to the next chapter I supose .
| TransBoyLeviAckerman chapter 3 . 4/9/2015
Its actually really fu- wait. I'm afraid to say bad words cause sometimes that makes people uncomfortable.
ITS ACTUALLY REALLY FRICKIN BRILLIANT RIGHT NOW ;D
I can't remember if I reviewed the last chapter or not.
But its going awesome right now .
Also, and I've seen this a lot, but what is Akuroku (I doubt I even got that right)? I don't get it /.\
Roxas is either thinking something is going on between Riku and Sora or he's thinking "Sora is ditching me to be with that fuckwad?"
Also, I silently agreed with Yazoo.
Last chapter I was already thinking "God Riku acts like a teenage girl on her monthly."
| TransBoyLeviAckerman chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
I died during this chapter XD
There were things that I liked, but then things that I disliked.
Sorry for my small bit of negative-ness /).(\
They were small, but they just sort of triggered this feeling of dislike. I don't know why.
It was those few quotes that you can hear commonly like "I don't think we're in Kansas anymore" and the "Get ready for a bumpy ride."
Idk, I'm just weird.
But that part where Sora was thinking "Coincidence? I think not." Was absolutely hilarious because its just the way I read it I guess? Well, on to the next chapter .
| TransBoyLeviAckerman chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
This chapter wasn't bad or boring.
Quite the contrary actually.
I've never heard of "It Started With A Kiss"
But I'm eager to read on .
I'll keep reviewing and sharing my thoughts for the heck of it :D
| A Nobody chapter 5 . 8/21/2012
good job now hurry up lol XD jk. I bet riku is going to feel like such an ass for what he said to sora 'if you crash my car,you better die with it'. sorry if i got some of it wrong but you know what i mean. cant wait to see what happens next!
| Dominus23 chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
So will you ever finish this story?
| Sora4KingdomHearts chapter 5 . 10/23/2010
I likee thisss! A LOT! :) Please update sooonnn, I really want more Sora/Rikuuu ;) hahaaa
| mjaku chapter 5 . 9/11/2010
Moreee 3333 Amazing chapter and the story is GOOD!
| Blood.Rave chapter 5 . 8/29/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope it comes out soon.
| MelodiousFenrir007 chapter 5 . 8/23/2010
Poor Sora! D Bet Riku is regreting saying, "If you crash this car, you better die along with it." now. [
Can't wait till the next chapter is up!
| MsSupreme chapter 5 . 8/15/2010
:OOOOOO i need to know whats happening now :OOO this is getting good now
| hasBEENseen with a nasty story chapter 5 . 8/14/2010
I LOVED it! I mean, it was totally awful and horrible and so so very shocking (and I can't wait for continuation), of course, but it was written so skillfully, efficiently, and you did it with such style I'm in awe! I think you captured the mood and vagueness very well and I could feel the incoherent air of the moment.
I cannot express how big of an impression that scene made.
In such a moment the thoughts really tend to be in not what really matters or is the most important in that moment, but something trivial like Sora's here. I remember last year I suddenly got sick and as my mom went to clean up the vomit (sorry about this story) I kept telling her that I was sorry, as she had to do that very unpleasant cleaning while I was puking to my heart's content (ok not really but...). I was in shock, I guess, as the sickness came out of the blue. She was disbelieving that I was apologizing for something like that. But, bah, it just felt important at the moment.
I know it's not really at all the same as what happened here, but it just reminded me of that. So to me, this was really realistically depicted. Wow.
I hate to beg but please continue soon...'kay?
| hasBEENseen chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
Hah, I love the sound of that; 'You know what to do,' makes me feel very important and capable.
| hasBEENseen chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
Woah. I could NEVER, /ever/ drive a car like that. Wh-ho-ho-hoah. O.O Shiet...