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Guest chapter 13 . 6/27/2014
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AmrasElanesse chapter 16 . 10/30/2013
I'm not reviewing this... not really part of the story...
AmrasElanesse chapter 15 . 10/30/2013
geth arm... how did i not see that one coming? I actually expected you to have it movee on its own throughout that ship and break will free...
from one douche employer to the next... way to go lol
AmrasElanesse chapter 14 . 10/30/2013
i'm pissed... he didn't even get the full confession out... thats bull...
AmrasElanesse chapter 13 . 10/30/2013
DUNDUNDUNNNNN! liana has reentered the scenes... *dramatic gasp*
as usual your comedy s wonderful... i get to smile through most of your chapters XD
AmrasElanesse chapter 12 . 10/30/2013
ahahaha gay bar... shaved eyebrows... i was actually hoping he would make a joke when ashley said she knew a good place to hang out.
good chapter... gonna be sad when they all leave :(
AmrasElanesse chapter 11 . 10/23/2013
curse you... what ya doin' with his arm ;)... Poor legion lost his arm.
gotta love greek mythology, keep up the good work.
AmrasElanesse chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
just had to have the "the cake is a lie" joke didn't ya lol. I kinda laughed when you said you were homeless and the event that happened after... had to re-read Gayrus a couple times to actually see it... almost thought it was a typo. Good chapter
AmrasElanesse chapter 9 . 10/23/2013
poor will... had to send tali away T_T... and now you gotta get rid of Garrus too!?... your life suuuuuucccckkkss. good chapter... I enjoy the fight scenes like usual
AmrasElanesse chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
good chapter.. never had the DLC for the ME 2 game but i do know of Zaeed and enjoyed him appearing... i wonder if we'll be seeing kasumi too? and I'm willing to bet that the Owner hired Zaeed.
Hooray for action! glad to see its getting exciting for Will again.
AmrasElanesse chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
lol I'm trying to imagine you running and yelling I WILL NOT BE DENIED! lmao
the power of dibs shall never be denied XD
good chapter, though I kinda miss the action... and do you do the comma on purpose instead of periods, exclamation points, or question marks? Or is it all just typo'd?
AmrasElanesse chapter 6 . 10/16/2013
Every girl loves chocolate... and if we ever get our beef cheeseburgers replaced by some weird meat (alien or otherwise) I will boycott anything to do with that company lol
Good chapter, it's always good to expand the relationships once in a while... just as long as it doesn't end up never going back to the main plot line.
AmrasElanesse chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Ha!... he can't dance... I cant either so I can't complain. and yes you need to be more discreet if you get caught you're liable to be smacked lol.
another good chapters... not sure if you've noticed but when you have people ask questions you usually use a ,... pretty sure a ? is needed lol. Enjoying this story more and more
AmrasElanesse chapter 4 . 10/16/2013
Nice place to add a Gurren Lagann reference in there lol. The battle seemed kinda short... guess I was expecting a bit more action in it. Still good though.
Sad to see Wrex go :(
AmrasElanesse chapter 3 . 10/16/2013
i heard a click... did the round go off? I must know!
was getting worried, the last chapter didn't have any funny parts so i enjoyed tali's "I have a shotgun" line XD
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