|Reviews for Fall Into The Sun|
| Bell 1 chapter 24 . 2/15
That was a very interesting story. Bella a fairy? That's pretty neat. It is sad and unfortunate that she has to watch those she loves grow old and die while she remains never aging.
Although, it is wonderful that she has a man that loves her thoroughly and loves her just at much. Though, I do think it would be neat if they kept having children since they can live so long, I think it would be wonderful for them to continue having kids. Maybe not one every year, meaning that they could wait 10 or more years before trying for the next "set". For example, they had four kids in this Epi, but maybe 10 years later they could have 2 more kids... then 10 years later have another 2 kids... so on and so forth.
Anyway, I love how this story was like Twilight and yet not. Meaning, I loved that they were able to keep Bella from the Twilight birthday party incident altogether. I loved that she became very close friends with Quil, Embry, & Jake months before Jake phased and imprinted on her... thereby becoming close friends first and allowing Bella's feelings for Jake to naturally grow.
I do hate that Quil always seems to be abandoned. My heart goes out to him so much! I'm glad he has a personality that doesn't hold grudges, or let things bring him down though. :D
Thank you for sharing this story with us. :D
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Nice start I love it.
| PastOneonta chapter 25 . 7/24/2013
You have Jacob's point of view tied to your story very effectively. It adds to the whole story.
| PastOneonta chapter 24 . 7/24/2013
I enjoyed this, it is different from other stories. The friendship with Bella, Jake, Quil and Embry is sweet. I was glad to see you carried it through to the end. The rest of the Pack, Charlie and Billy were well written. The vamp fight was dramatic and interesting. The Gaelic phrases and translation really added to the story. On the out takes, thanks for including them too!
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/15/2013
| snow eopard chapter 33 . 5/9/2013
This is so samn amazing. Swear I wish I had read this sooner
| WestlyHitachiin chapter 33 . 2/25/2013
Loved it!Especially the Jake/Quil/Embry/Bella moments! Amazing!
| Butterfly1993 chapter 33 . 12/29/2012
awesome story im very sad to see it end xxxxx
| Guest chapter 33 . 11/22/2012
WOW! What a faboulouse piece of writting. An outstanding story! I Loved it. Absolutly brilliant!
| Irish Speaker chapter 16 . 9/8/2012
Me again. Sorry while most of it is fine "I love you" should be something like "Is breá/aoibheann liom tú" grá is more the concept of love then expressing it to someone.
| Irish speaker chapter 15 . 9/8/2012
I've noticed your using Irish in your story. I thought you should know while most of its fine Againn usually comes at the end of a sentence and this wouldn't be the most accurate way of writing we are bound together.
| jacksperluvr chapter 24 . 7/26/2012
| LexiJBlack chapter 22 . 6/21/2012
YES! YEHEEEES! HE LIVE! YES! I KNEW IT! HAHAHAAH!
| LexiJBlack chapter 21 . 6/21/2012
NO! NO!NO!NO!NO!NO! I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT! HE IS NOT DEAD! THERE BETTER BE SOME DAMN MAGIC TO BRING HIM BACK TO LIFE! GODDAMNIT!
| LexiJBlack chapter 18 . 6/21/2012
NO! NO! NONONONONONONONONO! NO, I SAY! I REFUSE! JACOB WILL NOT DIE! BELLA WILL NOT DIE! NO! NO! NONONONONO!