|Reviews for Kissing Mr Merridew|
| MayaxZer0Always chapter 1 . 1/26
I love the story! :D
The ending was sad though! I feel like crying! T_T
However, altogether, great story! :) Please do another JackxRalph fanfiction or oneshot please! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Awww that's so sad! D': but it's still great :D
| Princess-Warrior 17 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Very dark, but I liked it. Jack pissed me off at the end, though. How could he do that to poor Ralph after everything they had been through? Sucks to psychological warfare indeed. Wow, their kiss was intense and that was probably my favorite part. I liked how you made Ralph a misunderstood artist...it fit him well.
It wasn't fluffy, but the bitter sweetness of it all made it a better story. Well done.
| Every-other-name-was-taken chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
NO! Jack better come back if he doesn't want to see Hell early!
| Dolphiness chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
So much for the happy ending I was expecting. *pouty face* God, the things I would say to Jack...
| CrzyGrl chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I feel so weird for reading this, BUT I LOVE IT!
| NO chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
OH MY GOD, NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOO! How could that happen? JACK, HOW COULD YOU! *breaks down* Poor Ralph!
| thechiifactor chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Jack ima kick your ass! Come back to Ralph or ima throw my Lord Of The Flies book in my fireplace! Screw you library fines, you cant control my rage! D:
| duckie1234 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Hey,I just read your Kissing Mr Merridew...and I was wondering if you could maaaaaybe make another chapter because I really wanna know what will happen next. :D
| Bloody-Battle-Bunnies chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I really love what you did with this story to make it true to the book, but give it the fantasy that is needs to survive on it's own! Love it!
| TiskyFirewhiskey chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Oh Gawsh! Made me feel like crying too!
(ToT) - This is me wailing.
| anoblevolunteer chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Sad ending :'( poor Ralph!
V good! *thumbs up*
| SideshowJazz1 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Jack is a very interesting character. He's a mean impulsive control freak from what I can see. But was he really heartless enough to break Ralph's soul in that way? But to tell the truth, not enough people write romance involving Jack that create him as evil from beginning to end, so it was cool to see him like that for once.
| Lauren Kassidy chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
great job on your fic. the ending actually made me want to cry! poor ralph :(
really good job though :] you're a good writer.
| TuesdayNovember chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Wow. That was amazing, seriously. There were a few minor mistakes, but nothing that couldn't be changed with a quick edit. But that aside - OH MY GOODNESS. The end was just brilliant. You did a super job. )