Reviews for Kissing Mr Merridew
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18
Jack you piece of fucking shit fr tho u better get ur ass back in there with Ralph. Fuck that Roger X Simon bit made my heart hurt too. At least those two actually loved each other sincerely
Girl Bonnie101 chapter 1 . 7/11
FUCK U JACK UR A DUMBASS...but after all it was a fantastic story and I luv it, good job U should keep this up and make more
angel.wings.baklava chapter 1 . 4/28
I want a sequel to this. Like idk Jack comes back or something
Ralph chapter 1 . 3/24
could you not turn the Golding's masterpiece of symbolism into this weird thing.
unexpected chapter 1 . 2/25
This was read in front of my English class. Thanks.
Taiga Flipsvilla chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
Damn. That was really good. Thanks for writing!
lotflover5463 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
I effing hate you
How dare you do this
I'm crying on the inside
Agh, errrrrrrrghhhhhh
The paiiiiiin D' hurt my feelings with this beautiful haunting masterpiece! DARN YOU!
TeamJackxRalph2 chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
You are just evil
MayaxZer0Always chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
I love the story! :D

The ending was sad though! I feel like crying! T_T

However, altogether, great story! :) Please do another JackxRalph fanfiction or oneshot please! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Awww that's so sad! D': but it's still great :D
Princess-Warrior 17 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Very dark, but I liked it. Jack pissed me off at the end, though. How could he do that to poor Ralph after everything they had been through? Sucks to psychological warfare indeed. Wow, their kiss was intense and that was probably my favorite part. I liked how you made Ralph a misunderstood fit him well.

It wasn't fluffy, but the bitter sweetness of it all made it a better story. Well done.
BlazeStarkRogers chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
NO! Jack better come back if he doesn't want to see Hell early!
Dolphiness chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
So much for the happy ending I was expecting. *pouty face* God, the things I would say to Jack...
CrzyGrl chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I feel so weird for reading this, BUT I LOVE IT!
NO chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
OH MY GOD, NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOO! How could that happen? JACK, HOW COULD YOU! *breaks down* Poor Ralph!
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