Reviews for Piece of Donut
fanastikal chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Excellent detail, and very creative. Loved it!
ruby890 chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
that was great. love the fic.

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Emma zooka chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Ahhh, the hardships of a training sorcerer brushed with a touch of humor. It's awesome!

I loved the ending

"But...I wanted that."

Amazing!
Obi's Second Cousin chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
*giggles* An excellent use of Dresden-style summoning adapted to this movie. And a fantastic little story. *giggles* Loved it.
RoMythe chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Today I saw the movie, and it was awsome! Your story describes them perfect *grins* Keep it up!
Maira the Panda chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
That was very funny and completely in character! I loved it!
Bane WolfBlood chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Really good!
Kaytori chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
HAHAHAHAH I laughed a good 45 secounds after reading that, nice work!
Epistle chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Lol, herioc sacrifices! Aw, poor Dave and his gone donut piece!
Professor Steinmetz chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
SO CUTE! Hehehe, Balthazar, giggling. You should write more stories for these two. I loved the last line though. Loved it! :)
Sara Wolfe chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
That was adorable. I loved it.
Katterina chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Nice. Very Dresden! I like that, since the movie had some Dresden aspects to it.
thesorcerousnation chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
This was hilarious and adorable! You had their characters down EXACTLY right, right down to the mannerisms and dialogue. Very nicely done!
Heavenmetal chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
cute scene
Reikiya Namiko chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
i loved it! that was so cute :D
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