|Reviews for The Pie is Mine|
| Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
There he sat, like a snapshot from happier days-My heart just melted in my chest, great job!
| Tuppence chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Great use of all three words...and I can just imagine Dean falling in love with a dog...but possible before the Hell Hounds ripped him to shreds, maybe?
Guess Dean's found the love of his life.
~ Trina ~
| Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
very nice MeAzrael - "like a snapshot from happier days, absolutely relaxed" - great image, nice to think of a smiling, happy Dean
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Very sweet! I was worried Dean was doing something inappropriate with his brother Right There. very sweet.
| Micaiah chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
That is just too sweet!
| Amberdreams chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Given their history you could have done this with either of the brothers (after seeing Sam with his temporary doggy friend in Dark Side of the Moon). Nice one!
| Katydid43 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Well now that was just lovely! A beautiful snapshot you created with your words! I especially loved the parting line... "Naaa", Dean sighed, "but I'll keep the apple pie." Absolutely Dean, and absolutely brilliant! :-)
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Awh, lucky puppy!
| okayokayokay chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Awww, this is so precious! I love golden retrievers so much too:)
| Swellison chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Aww...this is such an awesome image, Dean happily sharing his hamburger with a stray lady dog;-) Really neat idea to tell the story from Sam's POV, too.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Aw, sweet as pie.
| Tribble Master chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
that's sweet~ i'm glad dean found something nice. write on!
| Shannz chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
You already know my thoughts on this but I'll say it again - Wonderful job here working with so many elements! My muse just didn't lead me to work in the dog - but you did it beautifully.
I don't know what it is about Dean with kids and dogs...but wow, you nailed the feeling :)
| dreamlitnight chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Oh, Dean and his pie. Cute!
| BarbaraGER chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Hun, you rock, too!
This one was really really sweet! I can hear Dean say those words to the dog in his deep voice (and wished I was the dog so he would speak with that voice to me...**sigh**). And the combination of all the challenge words/themes/word count? ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
Five stars from me ;-)