Reviews for SARAH
kiwisrock chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
AMAZING! Wow! Thanks!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
And alliterative as well, that was interesting fun, rachel
msmargo chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
yes, awesome is the word.
Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
awesome
maria2906 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
O.o oh wow! You just described the entire process of Bella's changing into a vampire in 100 poetic words! This is..I've never seen anything like this and it's even more special since you wrote it for Sarah,who is simply wonderful and her own words are poems too!
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Hello. SARAH is very unique. You are a master of words! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Kats Flower Girls chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Very creative idea for a drabble/poem! It must have been hard to stay with just one letter starting each word & yet move the story along...

Now let me see if I understand the just of it... So, Edward & Bella are making love and Edward just snaps and then hurts Bella and has to change her to heal her wounds...
DeleteThisPlease9999 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Awesome alliteration, brilliant Betti.
GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I saw "red" and thought "oh shit!" The last word exclaimed, demanding and pleading...just...*wildly applauds you...THIS!*
Erikasbuddy chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
DUDE! THAT! was most awesome!
onePushyFox chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Oh, Betti! I so enjoyed this! I've never seen Twi-poetry before. Very cool!
SandytheSandstorm chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
My My My that was Hottttt.

Sandy
dihenydd chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
This is so very clever. Things like this often seem so contrived but I had read more than halfway through before I realised what was happening! Loved it.