Reviews for The Hill of Swords
Someone chapter 23 . 4/1
I am thoroughly disappointed. First off the story was little changed from having shirou here. Secondly the character development was stagnant. It felt like they were followers of shirou rather than people who come into themselves. And the greatest sin was the end. Why the fuck would shirou who is loyal to saber refuse women only to fuck someone in the end and have a SON. That's just fucked up. He's in love and has a child with another. shirou is a loyal person, so this ust disappoints me. I undwrstand in the sekirei fic but here he is devoted to saber, and fucking cheats on her in body. Fuck that
Rp13579 chapter 8 . 3/25
One piece? Naruto?
Guest chapter 23 . 3/23
Such a good story...but it was kinda sad at the end of it...i loved it till the end anyway
Dasgun chapter 23 . 3/16
Beta117 chapter 17 . 3/10
So what happened to her summoning again?
Beta117 chapter 13 . 3/10
That was a whole lot of build up with no satisfactory pay off
Look what Jesus did chapter 15 . 3/5
King of Kings? I think you mean King of heroes unless Jesus was summoned by the grail which would just be all kinds of ironic when you consider the holy grail myths
anbu31uchiha chapter 1 . 3/4
Nice story
AvidReader2425 chapter 7 . 2/25
Definitely a heartbreaking way to end the chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 5 . 2/25
This really is a great story, having a lot of fun reading it
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 2/24
Another really great chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 2/24
Really awesome first chapter
anon chapter 22 . 1/6
Sequel when? The best fanfiction I've ever read deserves it.
anon chapter 21 . 1/6
Just a heads up, Kanshou is the white sword and Bakuya is the black. Yin dark, feminine and yang is light, masculine.
HotDog Smoothie chapter 1 . 1/3
It's hard to believe that this was written roughly a decade ago, but despite that it's still one of the best fanfictions I've ever read
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