BERSERK! GUTS GUTS GUTS!

Shirou cannot Just project Excalibur its a divine construct he can only project Avalone(perfectly) because its been inside of him. Archer COULD project Excalibur but only in his UBW and it would kill but but long enough to beat saber with it.

Ok so im now at chapter 10 and im here to point out something here its Shirou hes was to senical and edgy Archer was bot like this at all even if he wws he wasnt like that until after he became a counter guardian and you’ve already showed that Shirou hasnt reached that

A broken phantasm is a technique archer CREATED

Custodian is most commonly linked to people like janitors which means people who clean up stuff like counter guardians in which archer is so shes most likely calling him that due to his other selves counter guardian status

Not a fan of Kirche sexual assaulting the main character at all he should put up boundaries

Shirou just pulled a Rin Tohsaka and its terrifying

Uh isnt Kirches family name Zerbst?

kinda a rush ending, but it's decent, the first fanfic of shirou (that ive read) finally seeing artoria again, and im happy for them

Just how strong are these artifacts to be able to take a noble phantasm that killed herucules 7 times and only one of them breaks?!

I'm going to be honest this shit ain't looking good my brother too much is stacking up and the rating is lowering at a fast pace

Is it heresy to say I like this more than In Flight? I do like the epilogue more, at least. I'd give it an 8.5/10 compared to the 8 I gave In Flight, so an all around amazing story.

When I sae the word 'night' in chapter titleFate/Hollow Ataraxia flashbacks*

Please look at MATTHEW 5 verses 33 to 37

A very nice bitter-sweet end. It wraps up a lot of things in a neat little bow. There are more than a few loose ends, but it’s actually FINISHED, meaning it has infinitely less loose ends as an incomplete fanfic.
To be blunt this isn’t the best quality story. It shows its age a bit, in the writing, story, grammar, and so on. Part of it is because ZnT isn’t exactly a nuanced and complex piece of literature. Part of it because Fate is a convoluted overly complex universe that makes the Marvelverse blush. Part of it is because you were probably relatively young, had no education or training in writing. And when you take that all into account (and perhaps even more so the fact that this story was made in like half a year) it having only some rough edges is pretty impressive. And because of how old it is, it also definitely inspired many people.
All in all, an enjoyable experience.