Reviews for The Hill of Swords
JaconeDO chapter 18 . 9/13
Shinigami200 chapter 10 . 8/10
Shirou cannot Just project Excalibur its a divine construct he can only project Avalone(perfectly) because its been inside of him. Archer COULD project Excalibur but only in his UBW and it would kill but but long enough to beat saber with it.
Shinigami200 chapter 10 . 8/9
Ok so im now at chapter 10 and im here to point out something here its Shirou hes was to senical and edgy Archer was bot like this at all even if he wws he wasnt like that until after he became a counter guardian and you’ve already showed that Shirou hasnt reached that
Shinigami200 chapter 4 . 8/8
A broken phantasm is a technique archer CREATED
Theif Lupin chapter 10 . 8/7
Custodian is most commonly linked to people like janitors which means people who clean up stuff like counter guardians in which archer is so shes most likely calling him that due to his other selves counter guardian status
Theif Lupin chapter 5 . 8/7
Not a fan of Kirche sexual assaulting the main character at all he should put up boundaries
Theif Lupin chapter 4 . 8/7
Shirou just pulled a Rin Tohsaka and its terrifying
Firefly9202002 chapter 3 . 7/28
Uh isnt Kirches family name Zerbst?
Voltsy chapter 23 . 7/23
kinda a rush ending, but it's decent, the first fanfic of shirou (that ive read) finally seeing artoria again, and im happy for them
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 19 . 6/28
Just how strong are these artifacts to be able to take a noble phantasm that killed herucules 7 times and only one of them breaks?!
ThanWright chapter 3 . 6/16
I'm going to be honest this shit ain't looking good my brother too much is stacking up and the rating is lowering at a fast pace
E chapter 23 . 6/12
Is it heresy to say I like this more than In Flight? I do like the epilogue more, at least. I'd give it an 8.5/10 compared to the 8 I gave In Flight, so an all around amazing story.
Rapidnoob chapter 3 . 5/28
When I sae the word 'night' in chapter titleFate/Hollow Ataraxia flashbacks*
zuyiko wolf chapter 1 . 5/17
Please look at MATTHEW 5 verses 33 to 37
Lawn Chair Reviews chapter 23 . 5/17
A very nice bitter-sweet end. It wraps up a lot of things in a neat little bow. There are more than a few loose ends, but it’s actually FINISHED, meaning it has infinitely less loose ends as an incomplete fanfic.
To be blunt this isn’t the best quality story. It shows its age a bit, in the writing, story, grammar, and so on. Part of it is because ZnT isn’t exactly a nuanced and complex piece of literature. Part of it because Fate is a convoluted overly complex universe that makes the Marvelverse blush. Part of it is because you were probably relatively young, had no education or training in writing. And when you take that all into account (and perhaps even more so the fact that this story was made in like half a year) it having only some rough edges is pretty impressive. And because of how old it is, it also definitely inspired many people.
All in all, an enjoyable experience.
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