Reviews for The Hill of Swords
Cloy552 chapter 15 . 7/2/2021
The Agnes telling her backstory and Shirou thinking over their similar backstories is a beautiful scene. Louise and Siesta's decision made me grin
Cloy552 chapter 14 . 7/2/2021
Ouch.

Couldn't play it while reading because I read it on my phone but I knew exactly where you meant EMIYA would start. Hurray for being able to mentally replay what I think is the most iconic part.

I never realized it was possible to feel bad a not hatesink character didn't die. But he sounded a lot more accepting of the fact he wasn't dead yet before he woke up.

As a side note halfway through his charge I started imagining it from the other side's perspective and the sheer nightmare that would look like (EMIYA still playing)
Cloy552 chapter 13 . 7/2/2021
KINKSHAME LOUISE'S SISTER!

That was a really cool combat exchange. I was expecting one of the really flashy weapons but honestly triple copies of Archer's favorite weapon seems like it was really fitting.

Siesta no.
Cloy552 chapter 12 . 7/1/2021
Y'know I've seen that scene of Kiritsugu finding Shirou at least 3 times this week, I think from UBW and once from Zero, and it's honestly awe inspiring just how raw a scene it is.

I feel like if Siesta heard about his night with the Princess she might actually start planning a revolt
Cloy552 chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
It's heaven for one and hell for the other lol
Cloy552 chapter 10 . 7/1/2021
I really like getting to see a bit of Louise's perspective at the end of each chapter. As well as her getting to see insights into Shirou's past
Cloy552 chapter 9 . 7/1/2021
I thought for half a second about why he wouldn't be able to trace more ammo but remembered it'd be inefficient and wouldn't likely last long enough to stockpile for battles even if he could make it. At least the plane can be used for flight
Cloy552 chapter 8 . 7/1/2021
So I know he only manages it in the UBW route... But now I'm wondering if he'll be able to use the reality marble... Masters are usually mana batteries for servants right?
Cloy552 chapter 7 . 7/1/2021
Hyper lethality weee!

He's giving a lot of students some very serious starters in combat lessons
Cloy552 chapter 6 . 7/1/2021
Hopefully she won't want to form the bonds that he'll refuse to form with her.

Guiche is learning, and being an excellent punching bag. I can see how that would be very Cathartic for Shirou.

Louise' automatic corrections are great. She doesn't even think about it.
Cloy552 chapter 5 . 7/1/2021
Dragon is amazing. And hey now he can have the less murdery little sister type!

And now she's seeing Archer and Shirou fighting~ I wonder if she'll get the background on that eventually
Cloy552 chapter 4 . 7/1/2021
Part of me wants her calling him out based on her dreams. That would be a riot.

Fouquet going from smug to "Oh god I'm gonna die if I stay here" was amazing.

I remember reading somewhere that Saber is weak to dragonslayers and am starting to feel like all these Reptiles liking him is somehow related to her liking him
Cloy552 chapter 3 . 7/1/2021
Ah I see it's the OG Fate rather than the cleaned version. Poor Louise.

...How old is Gilgamesh's legend again?
If I'm reading wikipedia correctly he's from 4 to 5 thousand years ago.

Wow Derflinger's old. Throw that at Goldie's face just to see how he reacts.
Cloy552 chapter 2 . 7/1/2021
I forgot to mention last chapter, but I love that both Archer, and Shirou end up starting their summoned existences in almost the same way, with random chores.

That was a wonderful scene of traumatizing a bunch of snobby brats.

And his explanation was also excellent

Welcome to the nightmare that is Fate Louise, don't know much about the game but I can assume it's on a similar level of existential suffering as the anime
Cloy552 chapter 1 . 7/1/2021
Since I just watched UBW I'm looking at recommended fanfiction now, and I was really hoping, and then very excited, when he copied Saber after being summoned.

Louise is in for quite a shock huh?
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