cringe trash

poor Shirou always having to deal with the thirsty girls

Thank you so much...

This work has brought me happiness!

always come back to read this and In Flight

What's the deal with Shirou's constantly changing personality? it almost feels like a goddamned self insert

I really like the connection between the Water Spirit and the Lady of the Lake! Well written

I normally don't post comment/reviews, mostly because anything I could say is already been said multiple times over. However I do have to say that this chapter after the part with baby fat, no including the part with baby fat, made me laugh so hard my head started to hurt and I start to sweat. I laughed entirely too long and too hard at that, and that is fantastic thank you

Love this story that’s all I can say

I always come back to this story, and I still love it! That is how you know that it's great.

Such a well written story. Congratulations !

I sounded if Tiffa could summon Artoria as her Lífþrasir, that might be fun or funny, ironic funny, if that were to happen.

Was honestly hoping that there would be a Shirou x Henrietta lemon in this chap.

Or at least a part that has them taking off each other's tops before fading to the next morning with both being without clothes, sweaty, and in a tangle of limbs that spoke of what likely happened during the night.

Then I could imagine the following conversation going as ... Shirou praying that the princess isn't pregnant before she wakes up and says something about last night being the most dangerous day in her cycle for such activities and how she hopes that his seed took root in her fertile garden, lol.

rule breaker

still dont like how you killed her

Well I like the story but the way he described his tracing/UBW is kinda wrong, his weapon mastery is based on the mastery of the current (at the time of tracing) and previous owners of the blade he traced therefore he has to train his body to make use of the experience and technique of the weapons owner its not "general experience with the weapon" also the weapon he chooses to use are based on the situation and not on what can counter the enemies weapon especially with his fondness for the bow and kanshou and bakuya, if shirou gets into a fight he will always start with the use of Structural grasp and tracing in unison to know not only the enemies fighting style but the power and durability of the weapon with weaker opponents he usually just goes with what can end the fight quickly with stronger opponents he tends to use archer's dangerously suicidal fighting style as it is a fighting style that he is more aquainted with and its based on his experience fighting servants or any opponents stronger than him. Shirou wont simply use a bow to fight a swords man because an experienced swordsman is more than likely they aware range is their weakness and have already prepared for such a fight.