|Reviews for The Hill of Swords|
| ZE Bri-0n chapter 8 . 7/6
You made two mistakes on this chapter. Common mistakes, but mistakes none the less. Magic Circuits are within the soul, not the body. However, they require biological functions to function properly. Usually. It causes the misconception that they are within the body itself, but they are not. The other is about True Magics. You see, True Magics cannot be replicated by science or conventional magecraft. My proof? Spacial Transportation is considered a High Thaumaturgy. A magecraft, not a Magic. Because mages can replicated it through study and experimentation. Not easily, hardly ever, but they can do it.
| A person chapter 23 . 6/28
one of the best Fate/Stay Night crossovers ever
| Tears of Hearts chapter 23 . 6/24
its a marvelous masterpiece...
I cannot recalled how many times have I cry and laugh and excited since the first chapter...
shiro's dedication to saber is very heart-warming...I am soo jealous so saber now...
| Kamikazebacon chapter 23 . 6/21
I really enjoyed reading this, although the personality didn't really seem to really be Shirou, it was still pretty awesome.
Super epic conclusion with Unlimited Blade Works raining hell upon the antagonist. I have seen this so many times but it never gets old, no matter the universe.
P.S. While I was halfway through the story, I had this crazy idea that Tiffania would summon Saber as a familiar at the end.
| Myself chapter 4 . 6/18
Driffon, most assuredly.
| judecarangan chapter 23 . 6/18
i finally finished the whole story... it was great! thank you for this! this is the first fanfic that i read from beginning to the end of story! well about who the woman shirou have a relationship with.. my guess is Henrietta... because well the clue somehow is the water spirit.. following with louies's reaction because she also favored Henrietta.. well they also became close as the story goes...
| Selet chapter 23 . 6/13
I must say, you are one of my favorite writers on this site. You complete your stories, and left me wanting more with this one. I do wish I knew how Shirou died here though. It was only about ten years since the previous chapter, so it couldn't have been from old age. It doesn't sound like he fell in battle, as Louise stated he wanted to die on a hill of swords, which is why they made his grave a hill of swords. If he had truly died on a hill of swords, I believe Louise would have forced them to dig his grave right where he fell. The only way I can think of them making him a grave on a hill of swords would have been because he died outside of battle, possibly dying due to the strain he put his body through and it couldn't hold up any longer. Scars from old battles adding up, eventually forcing him to point where his body would no longer be able to hold itself together. But even then, he was at least healthy enough in the last few months to have been able to get someone pregnant and continue his lineage for future generations, So I think that was unlikely as well.
Thank you for writing and completing this story. It has been many months since I found a story that entraps me to finish it that was this long. The last time I looked up from my computer, I was still on chapter 10, thinking there is so much left for me to read and enjoy, and now, only a couple hours later, I finished. When I saw the "Next Chapter" button disappear when I clicked to this chapter, I wanted to cry. Thank you for writing this story, and completing it to a point where everyone can be happy, with Shirou and Arturia reunited, and Shirou's legend to a point in which many can agree he will never become Archer wishing for a release that will never come. Thank you, and I hope I can read any future stories you make if In Flight and The Hill of Swords are any indication of your talent.
| Winter's Folly chapter 9 . 6/4
This dream sequence went through a bit of range in emotion, eh?
| Winter's Folly chapter 8 . 6/4
You know, this is the second time I came back to this. I contemplate I may have learned more about fate/stay night magic here than anywhere else. You are wonderful with explanations, and man do I like that last dream sequence.
| Winter's Folly chapter 7 . 6/4
what happened to all the guards in the wedding scene?
| Winter's Folly chapter 6 . 6/4
| Winter's Folly chapter 1 . 6/3
There are two moons in Louise's world. By the way, fantastic chapter.
| spost-ffnisdumb chapter 23 . 6/2
| StrangePointOfView chapter 23 . 5/26
This is a most excellent story, and I'm glad to have read it.
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/24
Yes a true ending one prefect for the hero of shirou emiya bravo this is by far one of the most powerful stories of fate I'll seen. I looking forward to the future of your work