|Reviews for Whispering Corridors|
| ChordOverstreetFan chapter 2 . 4/7/2013
Although Kouji is the one people would expect to be the alcoholic, I am not surprised that it was Kouichi that had the drinking problem. He IS the warrior of darkness after all.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
creepy, freaky, scary, but well written
| Hoookay chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
i loved dis story , it was gr8 :)
| M-intheclouds chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
uuuumm...that was a little scary and creepy!O.o
but for a weird reason i loved it so..ok!im weird i guess!:]
| BabiCastro chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Please continue this, pretty please? The chains of deaths will continue and know the handsome ghost lost his mask, that will make him even more irresistible
| DreamDuelist chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
I read that if you saw yellow to the guy he makes you put your head in the toilet and makes you smell pee.
| utsukushii04 chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
YAY! Takuya, and Kouichi too I guess, saved the day! _ The whole alcohol thing I would actually expect from Koji, but you know, the normal looking twin could be the "bad" one! heehee...they are so hilarious! The story was so suspenseful and a great read! See, I didn't want to read it last night because I felt it would scare me, so that's why I read it in the morning! _ AWESOME story.
I love the TAKUMI! That was so sweet and adorable!
Going back to the twins, I can't really say who is cuter. hmm...that's actually a great question.
| hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
Nye... Now I'm more scared on going alone... or even with someone... I guess I'll never go to the CR ever again...
Anyways, I like the horror story... Wait till I tell to my friend that likes scary story... Although his not much a fan of digimon...
On the contrary, I'd say that Kouichi is alcoholiic... What kind of idiot will bring an alcohol when sneaking up a school?
Yesterday, my classmates and I watched Paranormal Entities... and now, I've read another horror story... What else can happen next? Oh men...
Hope more horror stories to come...
| hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Whoa... Bomber! It really creeps me out...
Now I'm afraid to go to the CR alone...
Kouji always think everything is ridiculous... Even him is ridiculous...
I'm going for the 2nd half...
| Galesonic chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
That was a really good Urban legend fic. The best one I've seen. And damn. I thought Aka Manto would actually be dead. Turns out I was wrong.
Aka Manto: Red Cloak? Or Blue Cloak?
Me: Okay two things. 1: I'm a guy and 2: I'll rid you of this world.
Aka Manto: Haha! And how would you do that?
Me: *takes out a Chaos Emerald* With this. I'll rid the world of you.
Aka Manto: Yeah, right and I'm really Jack the Ripper.
Me: So long Jack. CHAOS CONTROL!
Aka Manto: WHAT THE FU- *blows up*
Me: Nothing beats Chaos!
| Hikari no Destany chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
Why didn't you keep him dead? Now I'm scared! WAAAAAA!
Amon: Gee, thanks, bandb. Alright, eat this lollipop and watch me kick this ghost's ass. The ghostbusters couldn't stop him.
Me: YAY! *slurps on lollipop, while Amon kick Aka Manto's ass and the ghostbusters suck their thumbs and rock in the corner*
Ray: It was...so raspy. It was scary. No, NO! KEEP IT AWAY FROM ME!
Me: _ Yay! Go, Amon, GO!
Aka: AHHHH! Get away from me, ya crazy psycotic bitch! Oh, and, Red cloak or blue cloak?
Amon: Blue, but ya ain't choking me. I'm choking you!
Aka: Ok, I'll note you in my diary. Now, I'm leaving. *disappears*
Amon: Damn, he got away.
Me: But if he ever coms back, you'll get him, right?
Amon: Meh. Now gimmie my payment.
Me: *rolls eyes* Fine. Here. *Hands her 500K in Yen. Notices everyone looking* What? She only hangs around if I pay her. I may own her, but she scares me. Anyway, I loved it. Yay for Takumi, and yay for Zoe living! _
| dingcs chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
I know how you feel. You have that itching urge to kill somebody after waiting all that time. Haha. If it's anyone, let it be Kouji because his emoness and long hair is intimidating me.
Kouji: Oh crap. Better get the "How To Convince Ashley Not To Kill Me" advice book.
Okay... Anyway, I like this second half and I'm glad they were able to escape with the help of Takuya's gun and Kouichi's alcohol. These should be found on everyone now in case of danger, too bad I don't have them. But I do have a Nerf gun and a drink that's addicting like alcohol (water) Yeah, I don't think that's gonna work. _;
Anyway great story with the bickering brothers and the Takumi! Of course, the Takumi :3
| Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
lol, looks like sumone has found the website called scaryforkids...
| utsukushii04 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
This was really good! I lvoed the Takumi you added too _ This is going to be really cool once they go by themselves! And OH poor JP! his cousin died! That must be really hard to deal with...Please update soon...now that I think about it I should update too...Oh well, see ya! _
| dingcs chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I'm not sure if I voted for this in your poll the other day, I don't remember, but whatever, I think this is great and creepy!
This Aka Manto guy only comes in public bathroom right? Like he doesn't come into private house bathrooms? If so, I'm glad. If not, then I will never go inside a single bathroom ever again. (lol)
Does JP know about his cousin? Oh my gosh, you have to update sooner! I want to know how'll they stop this!