|Reviews for Unwritten Fate|
| Guest chapter 22 . 8h ago
Wonderful story, please continue soon.
| hgluvslash chapter 22 . 2/22
omg i love the story and spock being jealous of spock prime iss so hilarious that my stomach is still hurting fron all the laughing i did. hope you write lots more
| Tara chapter 22 . 2/10
Wonderful and satisfyingly long chapter. Worth the wait. Bi love this story and will patiently wait for the nest installment. I really love that old sneaky Spock is on board the ship! Hope Jim gets some alone time with him. Hope it gets hot and young Spock walks in on it...yep. That would be fun...
| kim-shixun chapter 22 . 1/6
hello, hi, greeting. hell, i don't even know what to say.
i just happened to cross path with this fic by luck, couldn't even remember how but i ended up read it all the way here til the latest chapter in two days and one night in total.
and i didn't regret start reading it at all, not one bit, only one thing i did regret about is the fact that i know this fic too later ;w;
i could have known this awesome fic a long time ago earlier. not this first few days of this new year 2014.
and i don't know when will you update. because, i'm already in love with this one and can't wait to read more ;_;
but no, i won't bug you or anything. i'll be a good girl and wait patiently. yes. i can do that.
so, than you very much for this one, so far, i love every chapter of it !
| mightymads chapter 18 . 12/19/2013
Wow, this was an intense chapter too, and it was interesting to see how Uhura's opinion about Kirk slowly evolved. Though it's strange a bit for me that she was that dense and prejudiced for so long. A curious take of Gaila's and Jim's relationships. You made them much deeper than in the movie (taking into account that deleted scene when Jim decided to apologize to Gaila for using her and was so dumb not realizing at first it wasn't her he was talking to). I also liked the way you showed Scotty: a bit of a mad engineer alright, but quiet, observing and wise.
| mightymads chapter 17 . 12/19/2013
Omg, so much drama, and what intense drama!
And thanks for Sam. It's nice to see that even though he screwed up once he still loves Jim and cares about him.
| mightymads chapter 10 . 12/18/2013
Well, I'm happy that somebody on AO3 gave a cue that this story actually has a continuation already, because it was a marvelous chapter. I absolutely love the way you handled the psychology, grieving, Winona (yes! because many authors just make her an uncaring mother, but you showed the deep side of it, her coping, and that she was in no way a bad parent), and even this nice plot move with Lilly! You continue with her and make her not just a comedy relief, but important too, it's just wow.
| catbob1 chapter 22 . 11/13/2013
OMG! You can NOT leave us hanging like this. Pavel is begging with his puppy dog eyes. How can you resist? Thank you for sharing your talent. I am loving this so far and am impatient for the rest of the story. I know real life can be an awful bitch but please try to come back to this wonderful story. When you are able to return I would love to see more of Lily.
| Bluie Twilight Star chapter 22 . 11/8/2013
I love it! Please update soon! I can't wait to see where this is going :)
| Doni chapter 22 . 11/1/2013
Great update! We're really starting to circle this mystery with Gary and what he's up to. Love Spock's jealousy of the Ambassador. Poor guy is not subtle at all, which makes it even funnier that Jim is oblivious. Great to hear from you again, take care!
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/11/2013
This one made me emotional in a lot of ways (trust me, A LOT of ways). Anyway, bless your beautiful soul for writing this. I do hope you continue writing more chapters, I have a MIGHTY NEED.
| flimsysky chapter 22 . 10/9/2013
Hi there! Just wanted to drop by and say that this story is awesome! Love that the chapters are so ridiculously, juicily long! I also appreciate that you are taking a while to develop the characters and fill in their back stories- I especially enjoyed the interludes because they were so insightful and well written! Thank you for sharing this story :) I cannot wait to read the next chapter :D
| Domitian chapter 22 . 10/6/2013
I enjoyed reading your story, though it took me the better part of a couple of days to get current. :P This is the first story where Jim is First officer and Spock is Captain that I've read, and I adored it. I can't wait for your next update.
| Melbi chapter 22 . 10/5/2013
Amazing story, I can't wait for more! :D
| Viviane Renard chapter 22 . 10/2/2013
Slow and steady wins the race! While we had to wait awhile, I'm very happy to see an update for this lovely story. It sets us up nicely for the events to follow. Gary Mitchell's true nature is slowly being revealed, and Spock has done some soul searching in terms of why he gets defensive around the Ambassador. I can't wait to see where you take it.