|Reviews for Life of Silent Shadows|
| Stephy825 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Huh...first of all, please. Make. A new. Paragraph. For every. Person. Speaking. It makes the story hard to read if it's like this you know?
To be honest, I didn't finish this chapter for two reasons :
One, I have an assignment to do. So I'm cramming. *smirk*
And two, I got too lazy to read the squished paragraphs.
I recommend a beta-reader for this story to make it better, but a guy that has some connection with Atsuki is a good start. Sorry, I'm too busy to write more in this review, but I am willing to be your beta-reader if you like, just don't expect the chapters quickly. It's school for us ya' know...