Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
mxmsupporter chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
The reunion was so very desperate, I liked that. Also, this is a first story that had Matt dyeing his hair from red to brown, not the other way round ;) I loved the description of the whole FBI situation, great job!
checkerboardom chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I can't beleive I never found this story before. I love it!
HeartBeatFailure-x chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I dont know what to say other than "I LOVE!"...

so... yeah _

*AND FAVS* (:
PWN3D chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
3 I love it.
unperson chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Wow, I saw the title and i HAD TO READ IT. Nice too see you have a good taste in music! (Hello, crazy Muser here)

I love how you portrayed their emotions, you are a great author. The story flowed so nicely and you wrote Mello's character really well. And the way you captured their pain was so beautiful I wanted to cry (I cried :P). So very well written. :D

The only thing was that when the lyrics came up I kept imagining it being sung by Matt Bellamy. Like Living in a Fantasy said, it kinda threw me off, but the lyrics really did fit, really well.

This is definitely going to be a favorite.
xzombieViolinistx chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
loved this! beautifully written..I really like how you captured Mello's personality, especially.

awesome job
Elanora-Nayru chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
So beautiful, and it fits in well with the song by Muse:) You'll be pleased to know that it reduced me to tears in the right moments:) I'm definitely faving this:D
Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I really liked this! The whole fic is wonderfully written. So kudos to you! *gives cookie* *faves*
crispybutts chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
i loved this! it was great!
xxbeyondxbirthdayxx chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I really liked it!
Living in a fantasy chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Good descriptions and emotions, and a nice plot as well. I enjoyed this. The song lyrics threw me a bit, but that's just because I know the song XD But the fit. Nice job
DeathNotes-Matt-Chan chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
oh wow. You really surprised me here! When I first saw that this was a oneshot I ssumed it would be short and underdone like most of the other ones I have read but this was fantsstic! I love all the deta and emotion you poured into the story... Really well done and I am really glad. Nice work and thanks for making it so interesting. One of the best oneshots I have ever read
DeathNotes-Matt-Chan chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
oh wow. You really surprised me here! When I first saw that this was a oneshot I ssumed it would be short and underdone like most of the other ones I have read but this was fantsstic! I love all the deta and emotion you poured into the story... Really well done and I am really glad. Nice work and thanks for making it so interesting. One of the best oneshots I have ever read
Bedessica chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
i love this it is so cute :')
Sen-chan21 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
You have no idea how much I love this. This is beautiful, powerful, and excellently in character for both of them. I absolutely LOVE when Matt and Mello's intelligence really shows in stories. When they outsmart people and figure things out at ridiculous speeds. And you did that here, along with writing a beautifully emotional and heartbreaking romance.

Oh, and kudos for the Dante reference. Intellectual people on fanfiction make me smile.
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