Reviews for One More Try
xpurplexbutterflyx chapter 65 . 11/19/2017
loved every chapter! hope you can finish it..
Guest chapter 49 . 3/12/2016
You can't do original characters, you know - Hannah is a loathsomely self-centered Mary Sue who brings out the worst in Gibbs and pretty much all of them.
short and sassy chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
any hope of a finish to this one? hate to start reading if it is never going to be finished./ please~~~
Guest chapter 37 . 1/29/2015
Okay, we all know Gibbs is a bastard... so I guess a self-centred holier-than-everyone bitch is just who he'd fall for.
notquitearockgod chapter 65 . 12/17/2013
Enjoying this story hope you come back and finish it someday
dg101 chapter 65 . 7/21/2011
Fantastic update!:)
Angel N Darkness chapter 65 . 7/20/2011
you did a great job on this chapter.. love it... update soon...
DS2010 chapter 65 . 7/19/2011
Liked Tim beating up Paulson well played
NCIS-MCGEE-LOVER chapter 65 . 7/19/2011
Brilliant chapter, I'm loving this still. You continue to do such a wonderful job writing this. More soon?
smartkid37 chapter 65 . 7/19/2011

great going big brother.

sure am glad they don't use God's name in vain on the show though -

looking foward to the next chapter
dg101 chapter 64 . 6/24/2011
"And then the Director and Ziva will finish off whatever is left. You know Ducky and Abby will dispose of the evidence." Tony patted the man's cheek before he stood up to leave. "Sweet Dreams."

hahahahahahha- that! was great! I loved the update!:()
DS2010 chapter 64 . 6/24/2011
way to go Hannah kicking that guys butt
Angel N Darkness chapter 64 . 6/23/2011
you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...
NCIS-MCGEE-LOVER chapter 64 . 6/23/2011
loved it. for a moment there i thought things were going to get a little more rough and thank god it didn't. Wonder how Tim and Gibbs will react when they find out. still loving this, though its not hard when the storyline is fantastic. looking forward to upcoming chapters so update asap.
Angel N Darkness chapter 63 . 6/15/2011
you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...
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