Reviews for Unexpected Consequences
herart chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Really good one. I must be in a roll, I've read more of them these days.

I like how in less than 8000 words the story touch a lot of subjects.
Sugar0o chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
lol i love that last line! the whole thing was good :3
supernlp chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Nice! Darkish but nice... And this viewpoint is very plausible. Hey maybe Dumbledore himself despite being powerful and having a finger in many pies couldn't do much by being "good' because of the society's bigotry. He was a Half Blood too, wasn't he?

At the end of the day, the justifications don't matter much, the actions are what they are. I like Harry's attitude when he doesn't try to justify his actions except to tweak Dumbledore's nose. He did what he did... yup!

Loved it1
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Not a bad story.

And Harry solved the inbreeding problem? AWESOME!
Venus914 chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Very good! Would have been perfect if it wasnt with GERMionne or Herwhinny.
mobulis chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
As soon as there's a new headmaster Dumbledore will tell them everything that harry told him so it will become known.
Igor De Souza Santos chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
bom
Sam chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
It sad to see that a very good storied only gets 75 reviews while bad ones get 1,000 plus revies.
Sam chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Nice story.
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
A good post final battle story where the hero got his Hermione. Interesting ideas on the elder wand and good reveal of Dumbledore trying to protect his greater good but in the end destroying so many lives. One wonders if the magical world after final battle could have dealt fairly with the death eater problem or the pure-bloods just wait for the next dark lord and take over again.
Thanks for sharing your story. What about a time travel redo story?
Osmodious chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Excellent short...a 'dark-ish' Harry who really does promote the greater good. Nice!
Runecutter chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Brilliant! Marvelous! In your face old Goat-herder! :D

Only... wouldn't Harry confess something SO big to his wife and confidante?And wouldn't she notice the tendency and make the right conclusion just like Sherlock Holmes? Can't see that staying a secret between those two ;) Maybe before the public at large, Malfoy and similar affluent Patriarchs might even try to adopt promissing children just to keep the line alife and nobody would dare to talk openly about it and the Weasley's would just wail and suffer but never notice the pattern or maybe even make the war responsible. Only... Hermione, Hermione WOULD know!

But maybe she just lets him keep this last guilty secret to not burden his conscience even more with the deeds...
Midnight Angels chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I've read "Dark Harry" stories that were gory, vicious, and/or just plain violent, but something about the cold-bloodedness of the ending of this one is particularly chilling.
Faraway-R chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Well, the story was worth reading. And, I can, kinda, feel for this Harry. He is the V, or the Lelouch of Wizarding World, the man who destroyed the old world to let someone else (mainly, Hermione) create a new one.

Besides, he was definitely more of a Master of all trades, but only one at a time. I can accept his harsh measures, because no politician could keep his hands clean. Even if Weasleys all died out.
FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Very well written.
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