|Reviews for Fancy Footwork|
| AoiFLAME chapter 19 . 2/26
I love omurice! Maybe I'll go make myself some now hehe.
| Jellybell chapter 27 . 2/11
I love Sasori. He's just like "Fuji!" and Itachi does whatever he wants. This was hilarious. Write more!
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 27 . 2/8
That was a beautiful epilogue! Sniff...I'm so sad that that's the end! That was really good story and enjoyed every moment of it.
Sakura and Itachi.
They were a real sweet couple and I always enjoyed reading those parts where you always mentioned that their such a sweet couple that it's nauseous. Very funny.
Sakura at the beginning of the story and what she turned out now was an amazing transformation. I love how you changed her and how you fixed her family problems and how you kept Itachi and Sakura together like that. It wasn't a deep plot. It was just nice and sweet and I loved it! I love your portrayal of her! She is just such a lovable person in here and I feel a bit envious of her now.
And Itachi. He was just the perfect character but as you said he isn't that perfect. And another reason why I like him. You showed his imperfection though there were more perfection, but you didn't buy the whole he is so perfect he could do nothing wrong thing. It was refreshing to read him being perceived in this way. And I also like it when you added that part where he was turning into Buddha and how he put up with all his friends even though their strange. Your portrayal of him was very realistic and I can't help but fall in love with your version of him than the original. He was sweet and adorably clueless and their relationship was natural. He is quite the charmer to and some parts of the story I felt that truly Sakura is the most luckiest woman alive.
Their children are adorable. And I love that you made Ruka love Sasori out of her other Uncles. It was just a bit pitiful to see Deidara being ignored for his partner. Really funny. And Haruki is cute. I love the children. They are perfectly theirs in every sense.
I've been reviewing a lot on him because you made him so memorable and often times I just can't stop fa girling over him. He is just so cute in your story. I especially love the rolling up anything made out of paper and preceding to wack Deidara with it. His so called 'weapon'. And especially love his lollipop addiction. And the explanation of the addiction. Really creative. The recent scene where you made him admit to Sakura that he did love her but showed zero romantic interest in her was ingenious. I was a bit worried there about Sasori stealing Sakura away from Itachi but I'm ok now.
And lastly I like all the joking references you made to Sasori. Like how he is a ninja, and the Fiji thing, and really the alien comparison was a knocker! I can't stop laughing from this! I truly am loving Sasori right now. Your portrayal of him is the bomb!
Deidara and Kisame
They are meant for each other. As best friends of course. I love their witty banter and ridiculousness in the story. They were really the humour steam of the whole thing. Every moment they fight was really entertaining and I enjoyed every moment of it. And especially enjoy the nick naming and the references to Sakura's assets. And especially she they are threatened by her. They are both cowards.
And how they became papa and mama? Hilarious. Seriously.
Kisame and Deidara's portrayal is very nice and well done. I hope if you write anymore stories you would use these personalities again! They are really to be cherished!
Sasuke is was really the most changed person in my opinion. I'm happy to know he actually settled downtime somevody. Especially it being Karin. She deserved it. You actually made Karin appealing in your story and I am really giving you a thumbs up at making me change my opinions of her. She truly is misunderstood sometimes. Your outlook on her is fresh.
Naruto and Hinata is such a cute couple. Really happy you support NaruHina! And though it an ok couple, Shikamaru and ino look good together. The betting on the, as funny and I liked it.
Neji was my absolutely favourite for a time. He was just sadistically evil that I just had a crush in him for a while. I'm glad that he is nicer ish a bit now and it was nice to know that he was jumped by TenTen. The whimp!
I like the Konan moments and Nagato even if for a brief appearance seems like a good guy.
Hidan's first appearance in the story was memorable, I have to say. He is quite the barber.
Zetsu it was memorable. I love the way you described his hair.
The whole story
At first when I end it I thought it wasn't going to be that good. Just another cliche story or something but boy was I wrong. It was a wonderful story. It was funny and amusing and a real page turner. The ending was beautiful and I love how they ended up in the end. Sasori will forever be Sasori and I am glad that Sakura and Itachi's love had remained constant those lucky 15 years.
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY AND THANK YOU UNVERSE FOR LETTING ME FIND IT AND PRODUCING SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER FOR THIS FANDOM! THANK YOU SO MUCH AND I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE AWESOME WORKS AS GOOD AS THIS!
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 26 . 2/8
Hahahhahha and waaaaaaaaa! I laughing and crying right now because of the ending! Your story is sooo emotional and I just really really felt the need to cry! That was such a sad story! It wasn't exaggerated and it wasn't cold...it was a. Perfect departure between the two of the and it sort of is breaking my heart as of now! And feel for Deidara and I hope he gets over it soon! I hate to see him crying! And Itachi! Is just absolutely Itachi! I'm sure Sakura will miss him loads! And I'm glad Sasuke came to say goodbye. I love his transformation throughout the story adnt this is quite a nice conclusion. I cant wait to read the next chapter, and find out what happens next!
Really it's so sad to see her leaving! I especially wailed in the graduation! It was to heart wrenching! Too sad...I just had to cry!
And lastly I would like to say, a nice well done job at keeping a constant reminder in your story about Fiji. That will forever be a long standing joke.
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 25 . 2/8
I'm glad you cleared up the relationship between Sasori and Sakura. A really good Sasori-ish response. Loved every single moment of this chapter!
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 22 . 2/8
Oh mug Gosh! I want a boyfriend like him! That was soooooooo direct and sudden and so Itachi! I love it! I'm like freaking out and fan girling at the same time at that last scene! So...ah perfect!
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 18 . 2/7
OMG! Itachi is soooo impossible to be seduced! And I love your reference o him as a monk. Totally laughed my ass of at that!
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/7
SASORI-KUN! OMG! What is he? A hall way monitor? I mean OMG! He just passed by them and made weird comments and i was like SASORI! HE IS SOOOOOO CUUUUTE! I WANT TO TAKE HIM AND HUG HIM!
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/7
"If Itachi dies in a horrible accident, let's get married,"
YEEEZZ! I DO SASORI! I DO!
OMG! I that was totally Sasori! I really really EXTREMELY love your Sasori! He is just to cuuute!
And yes...sometimes he is just a wee bit scary sometimes. I thought he was asexual before this.
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 11 . 2/1
Sasori is just sooooooo cuuuute! I know I've been doing the same comment for the past few reviews but I can't say anything else! And Itachi is just so suave and they really really look good together! I just love Sakura! And I love now that Sasuke is tolerable! And OMG! I just looooooove Sasori's addiction to lollipops!its just to cute! And how he just bluntly state everything! I loooove him! You really cants keep anything from sasori can you? Imean, one look and he was like 'when did you guys get together?' And I was like, squealing like a mad banshee. Also I the past chapters wherever there was cuteness to be fan girl about! I just love your story!
Totally love the last part! Deidara and Kisame are awesome!poor Sakura and her assets.
| Farah Setina chapter 4 . 2/1
OH MY GOSH! ITACHI WAS SOOOOO COOL! I LOVE THAT PART TOWARD THE END! ITACHI PUTTING ON HIS SUNGLASSES AND DRIVING! OMG! INSTANT FANGIRLING MODE RIGHT NOW! ITAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACHI! HE IS SOOOOOOOO HOT COOL AND JUST PLAIN AWESOOOOOOOOME! I LOVE YOUR PROTRAYAL OF HIM! I LOOOOOOOOVE IT!
| The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 3 . 1/31
I love Sasori! He is soooooo cute! I love him better than the canon version of him! So KAWAI! And him sulking while eating a lollipop! So so so cuuuuuute! I can't stop squealing over that! It was so adorable in my head! Yeah Sasori-kun!
And Itachi was so nice! Yay for him! I love the last part with him smirking!
Deidara is so cute getting hit by Sasori! A rolled up magazine! Their banters are so adorable!
Kisame is nice! I love the big brother figure!
Zetsu is cool! I love how you describe his hair!
Well, that's it! I hope there are more candy Sasori moments in the then next chapter!
| KDTBpantherwulf chapter 18 . 1/16
Lol, Tachi tension.
| Bleuboo2013 chapter 3 . 1/15
I can't really explain why but I loved this chapter.
| KDTBpantherwulf chapter 4 . 1/14
Ha, whenever I see lines like, "She stumbled as she forgot how to walk for a moment." I always think of the character being like, 'Oh. My. GOD...I'VE FORGOTTEN HOW TO WALK! OMGHOWDOESITWORKIJUSTCAN'T-Oh. Wait. You just put one foot in front of the other! *takes a step* Nailed it.'