Reviews for Shin Chan Is Missing
Vergaux M.I.A chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
I liked this.
WishingDreamer5 chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
Penny's stuffed bunny had me laughing there. It's been such a long while since I saw Shin chan that I completely forgot about that. All in all, I had fun reading this story. It's like reading an old book again that you used to read as a child. And this is pretty good for your first story.

There were some typos here and there, though, but nothing too serious.
WishingDreamer5 chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
I think this is a very interesting turn and I like the idea of the letters and that it includes clues. But what I kinda miss here are the descriptions of the places, like what the appartment of Mr. Taylor looks like, etc. It makes the story more interesting and now, the dialogue stands out a little too much.

On to the next chapter. :)
WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
It's strange that nobody has reviewed this yet, especially because this is definitely one of the best Shin Chan fics I've read so far. I'm not sure why you chose for this lay-out, though, because usually, stories are aligned left. But it's not really annoying, so this is just me being nitpicky. :P

But gosh, they are kinda harsh. On the other side, he kinda asked for it.