Reviews for Playing the Part
b3j02 chapter 14 . 12/13/2012
Great story! Wish there were more of them! They were great!
b3j02 chapter 13 . 12/13/2012
Awww they seem so happy as a family of five!
Although just there at the end I heard the "DUN DUN DUN" uh oh Edward, run!
Wonderful chapter!
b3j02 chapter 12 . 12/13/2012
What a lovely Christmas. I am so glad they got a boy too. I just feel so bad for little Aimee and I wanted her to feel special for a little while longer anyways.
b3j02 chapter 11 . 12/12/2012
I don't know that I would tell my kids she was in the hospital again, especially knowing they wouldn't find out while she was in there. He told them she was sick and needed help, I think that should be enough. So sad.
b3j02 chapter 10 . 12/12/2012
Poor little Zach, he was so upset and scared. Sweet boy. I loved the ending there.
b3j02 chapter 9 . 12/12/2012
Tough stuff Edward, but he has to do what he has to do. I admire the fact that he is willing to go through whatever feelings his kids may have towards him just to keep them safe.
b3j02 chapter 8 . 12/12/2012
Awww way to go Aimee! Edward is a good dad and his kids are a testament to it. Zach is so cute!
b3j02 chapter 7 . 12/12/2012
Aww I feel bad for all of them. They are in a tough situation and they don't know how to handle it or where to start.
coxie chapter 14 . 10/28/2012
I loved this story! Great job. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. )
Guest chapter 14 . 10/17/2012
Well I can't say I like Bella in this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Of course he has children... Dream Man and Prince Charming he's not. I'm not sure why fanfiction authors so often make Edward a father.
I mean who want a guy who has children wit another women. In real life it happens - yes. And in real life it doesn't bother me, but I don't like reading about widowers in love with their dead wives, about cheating husbands and fathers. If Bella had a child in this story I would be ok, but only Edward has children so it's not for me.
But I like your writing and I will check your diffrent stories.
Whitney Love chapter 14 . 9/15/2012
Love. Gonna miss this.
XXX
Whit
irelandk chapter 14 . 9/14/2012
:-)
Twink423 chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
Such a beautiful story and a beautiful family. Thanks for sharing their life with us. :)
Twink423 chapter 10 . 9/7/2012
Big steps with Bella and the kids. Glad Bella will be moving in now too!
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