Reviews for Playing the Part
Nicffwhisperer chapter 13 . 2/8/2014
Oh no Charlie is about to get him lol
Nicffwhisperer chapter 12 . 2/8/2014
They are sweet together.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
How heartbreaking.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
I love that the kids are finally accepting her.
WiseOldSoul chapter 3 . 1/10/2014
i realize this is a messed up situation,
but i hate that bella keeps tempting this married man
no matter how she feels.

i also hate that he has no balls to divorce
the witch.
i would have liked to have seen bella stay clear away
from Edward and leave after the play is over
which makes edward realize how much he missed and
loved her.
edward would then chase after bella and proclaim his
undying love and both together fight for the custody
of the children.
the way things are, bella will be someone who wrecked
a marriage by chasing a married man...
imho...
pwrmom2 chapter 14 . 11/10/2013
Loved it
tulips3 chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
I enjoyed your story! :)
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
damn who the hell is he married too no let me guess Tanya oh hell no
Vampfan1 chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
I can't believe some of your readers didn't pick up on the full custody thing and you had to write an authors note about it. IT WAS SO OBVIOUS! Did they not read that chapter? I just thought that that was really funny that they were clueless to the foreshadowing in your story.
nat1607 chapter 10 . 2/4/2013
I don't have kids, but I cried and cried reading this! This story is beautiful and so moving. Real life can be hard and challenging and not many stories here are as deep and real as yours. All the best!
colrey chapter 14 . 2/3/2013
Another beautiful story from Kyla!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/23/2013
Lovely story. Thanks for sharing!
b3j02 chapter 14 . 12/13/2012
Great story! Wish there were more of them! They were great!
b3j02 chapter 13 . 12/13/2012
Awww they seem so happy as a family of five!
Although just there at the end I heard the "DUN DUN DUN" uh oh Edward, run!
Wonderful chapter!
b3j02 chapter 12 . 12/13/2012
What a lovely Christmas. I am so glad they got a boy too. I just feel so bad for little Aimee and I wanted her to feel special for a little while longer anyways.
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