|Reviews for Throw the ball|
| Gail Cregg chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Truly character,touching but not too sappy and a nice episode well done.
| Zee Viate chapter 4 . 8/19/2010
I liked this, especially the first section.
| Zee Viate chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
Great drawing :)
| Zee Viate chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
I enjoyed this. A story's heart is more important than its grammar and this one had a lot of heart.
| katesari chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
youre forgiven! i loved the picture, and the first two chapters were good too. bye
| aloha94 chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
Lol, nice picture! :)
| aloha94 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Very nice! Your writing style is almost sort of poetic. I loved the last part especially:
He can't win, he can't lose, he can't even quit the game.
...Throw the ball.
Your writing is very good, for not being a native English speaker. :)
| scousemuz1k chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
Well, I liked it. I liked the phrase about fear taking all the heat from him, and the last line was typical Tony. Don't let the lack of reviews put you off, and keep on writing stories.
| Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I liked it a lot.
And your English was very impressive, by the way.
Very nice job!