Reviews for Peaches, Coconuts and Kiwi
Izzy2174 chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I love it:) Please update soon!
Liliesshadow chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
um...i know its been over a year but why did you stop writing? this is good!
L00pa chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
it's too bad it looks like you've abandoned this story because i really enjoyed the first chapter & was looking forward to more.
Olimpia chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
hey dont know if ur continueing this story or not but i am already intrigued and am hoping that maybe you will write more and update. i think this story has got lots of potential and well i just really really wanna read it and see what happens. im more a reader than a writer so hopefully ul continue it coz it really good. night :D
Volleyball Babe22 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I really like the idea for this story so far! I hope you haven't given up on it...I would really like to read more! Great work! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Great start! I can't wait to see how everything is going to play out.
CoffeeTableWriter chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Sounds very promising, can't wait to see where this goes!
ber1719 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Well so far, so good in my opinion. I can really feel the attitude and all the other range of emotions in the words of the story. It's strange getting that. I don't read a lot of first person stories. Just because hardly anyone writes them in TP or BoB. It's quite sad because you can really get a lot out of first person narrative that you just don't get with third person. But, since you're trying it, I'm happy.

It's off to a really great start. With the character development and the establishment of the story. I really hope to see the next chapter soon! :)