|Reviews for Take Care of You|
| doc boy chapter 4 . 6/2
That was sweet. Though I don't think ash would be up to doing that sort of thing in the end there. Also how old are they in this story?
| doc boy chapter 3 . 6/2
Here we go
| doc boy chapter 2 . 6/2
Looking good. Though it makes me sad to see ash like this and that he needs a wheelchair to get around and May's help to do it
| doc boy chapter 1 . 6/2
Looking good. I hope ash is gonna be okay
| Devrat chapter 4 . 12/24/2016
Nice and short.
| toumakamijou298 chapter 4 . 12/14/2016
Ok read this story and I love it the way you got ash and may was wonderful sorry for Dawn but she will have her day when May dies or when she divorces Ash
| pokefan writer chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
hey nice story
| Bulbreon chapter 4 . 4/2/2015
Good story and all, but at the end wouldn't it be kind of hard to have sex with Ash's bruises and such? Just saying that would kind of hurt.
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
Another nice story XD. Thanks for writing!
| Um chapter 4 . 5/17/2014
So he is some how held form the fall I like it but how is Abel to get it wellllllll on
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
I loved the story, but I was'nt sure about the sexual part to it /
| ShadowMann chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Hey, you did a good job at starting this story.
At first, it was sad that Ash almost sacrificed himself for May but Ash is a hero. Heroes are never afraid to give their life for others even for someone they care about.
Again, nice job.
ShadowMann (Also known as TimistheMan)
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
Nice story, but I'm really clueless here... What did they do?
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
I bet they played hide and seek upstairs. :P
| Modern Venom chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
That was a good story. :3 But the ending...