Reviews for Take Care of You
doc boy chapter 4 . 6/2
That was sweet. Though I don't think ash would be up to doing that sort of thing in the end there. Also how old are they in this story?
doc boy chapter 3 . 6/2
Here we go
doc boy chapter 2 . 6/2
Looking good. Though it makes me sad to see ash like this and that he needs a wheelchair to get around and May's help to do it
doc boy chapter 1 . 6/2
Looking good. I hope ash is gonna be okay
Devrat chapter 4 . 12/24/2016
Nice and short.
toumakamijou298 chapter 4 . 12/14/2016
Ok read this story and I love it the way you got ash and may was wonderful sorry for Dawn but she will have her day when May dies or when she divorces Ash
pokefan writer chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
hey nice story
Bulbreon chapter 4 . 4/2/2015
Good story and all, but at the end wouldn't it be kind of hard to have sex with Ash's bruises and such? Just saying that would kind of hurt.
Lover of Pokemon chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
Another nice story XD. Thanks for writing!
Um chapter 4 . 5/17/2014
So he is some how held form the fall I like it but how is Abel to get it wellllllll on
Guest chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
I loved the story, but I was'nt sure about the sexual part to it /
ShadowMann chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Hey, you did a good job at starting this story.

At first, it was sad that Ash almost sacrificed himself for May but Ash is a hero. Heroes are never afraid to give their life for others even for someone they care about.

Again, nice job.

ShadowMann (Also known as TimistheMan)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
Nice story, but I'm really clueless here... What did they do?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
I bet they played hide and seek upstairs. :P
Modern Venom chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
That was a good story. :3 But the ending...
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