|Reviews for Take Care of You|
| pokefan writer chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
hey nice story
| Bulbreon chapter 4 . 4/2/2015
Good story and all, but at the end wouldn't it be kind of hard to have sex with Ash's bruises and such? Just saying that would kind of hurt.
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
Another nice story XD. Thanks for writing!
| Um chapter 4 . 5/17/2014
So he is some how held form the fall I like it but how is Abel to get it wellllllll on
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
I loved the story, but I was'nt sure about the sexual part to it /
| ShadowMann chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Hey, you did a good job at starting this story.
At first, it was sad that Ash almost sacrificed himself for May but Ash is a hero. Heroes are never afraid to give their life for others even for someone they care about.
Again, nice job.
ShadowMann (Also known as TimistheMan)
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2013
Nice story, but I'm really clueless here... What did they do?
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
I bet they played hide and seek upstairs. :P
| Modern Venom chapter 4 . 3/10/2013
That was a good story. :3 But the ending...
| Modern Venom chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
CAT FIGHT! XD
| Mystery Guy chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
You naughty boy anyways you did good except the last part...Well I hope to read more of your stories at least if it's appropiate *Glare*Well...PEACE!
| will.ogilvie.emmasbestbud chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
it's so beautiful
| Napjack5427 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I love your advanceshipping I wish that you would just make them longer I think that ash and may are ment to be together all your stories move me when I read them I'm in the verge of tears I love your stories
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/30/2012
i was thinking of a song by btr called big night
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
lllllllllllllllllllllllllllo oooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvv vvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee it!