Reviews for Taylor and Jolteon
seirra 1567 chapter 65 . 5/8/2016
Great story. A lot of ups and downs and making us go like, 'what the hell man? Just get back together already!' Loved Hiro's character as well as Tala. I've always loved him and the bond that grew between Taylor and the rest of the team over the passage of time was amazing.
However, there was one thing that really confused me: Taylor's looks. I mean who has a, 'the-phones-for-you' look? Or anything that could easily be said 'look'? Sure, she wasn't supposed to give two fucks about anyone buy that seemed a bit...out of place...Other than that, it was really good. Keep up the good work. Cheers~
Raequan Ervin chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
she's like erza
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 17 . 1/24/2015
In reality, 12 inches are abnormal. How the fuck would guys keep it in their pants? They'll need big pants... fuck man! No one can have a dick bigger than 12 either...
TheLadyMuse chapter 64 . 3/11/2013
Have you considered a sequel based around Julia and Johnny? Perhaps have him come back from the dead? If you'd allow it, I'd actually be interested in that sort of thing. No offense!
Casper67 chapter 65 . 1/7/2013
yeah
Overall a nice fic.
Kept me reading during ma Xams also. Lol

The spider thing was funny.

I didn't want johnny to die. Really sadddd
And again nice fic.
Rey2311 chapter 64 . 10/4/2012
This story made me cry so many times :) I loved it!
IronMaidenLeigh chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
probably my favorite story ever ;)
KittyCat09 chapter 18 . 11/27/2011
Holy Shit! Hahaha! This sure made me laugh! xD

Damnnnn! I bet Ozuma's Cock size is at least 15 cm! Hehe! Who knows? ;D (I wish I knew 3)
Hazel Heartfilia chapter 65 . 11/13/2011
Wow I love this story, it had so much suspense even I didn't know what would happen. Thanks again for uploading such a great story... PEACE OUT!
seirra 1567 chapter 45 . 10/23/2011
if its a non-blader.. then is it hilary?
rinalovexo chapter 65 . 8/15/2011
OMG. I was like ''FUCK YEAH. NEW CHAPTER! askjhfsdkjhfsdg''

Lol. Trolling around, right? :D x
Mirage Enamel chapter 64 . 7/22/2011
That was amazing. I think you did good in the ending. That's always the hardest part to write :)

Btw I've learnt that it all depends on the kind of guy they are to whether or not they talk about periods. Some are just grossed out but I've found that some turn around and have a joke about it simply because they know you're only trying to get rid of them xD my guys friends do it all the time -.-
rinalovexo chapter 64 . 7/22/2011
Laast chapter! *sob, sob* Great job tho!

Ofc I'll continue reading Katie and Darius.

You are fucking awesome! :-) xxxxx
meh chapter 64 . 7/22/2011
aaaw, its over! :(

aaaanyway, THAT WAS A FANTASTIC STORY!

and yeah, LOVED the things pov.

leader thing

lol

im gonna miss taylor :(,

but, dont worry, ill still keep reading katie and darius ;)

keep writing stuff like this please! :D
Freekiellie chapter 64 . 7/22/2011
*sob sob* FOR THE LAST TIME, I GET TO SAY THIS!

THANK GOD I'M SIGNED IN OR I WOULDN'T HAVE HAVE BEEN ABLE TO REVEIW THE LAST CHAPTER ON THIS MAGNIFICENT STORY! *ahhhh! sob sob SNORT sob sob sniffle*

A HAPPY ENDING! *cries* Ahhhhhhhhhhahahaaa *sob* Mwweeehhhhh! *sniffs*

Love you :') You are phenominal. I will never forget you! Oh, I forgot about your Katie and Darius story... YEY! More to read!

Freekiellie xxx
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