Reviews for Dreaming Wide Awake
Secret Storywriter chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I like it!

I love how no one has the heart to wake up Ariadne and how Eames feels sorry that he woke her up. I wonder how fascinating it must be for Yusuf, Eames, and Arthur to watch Ariadne dream considering they don't anymore.

There are a few issues concerning continuity that I am a little confused with. Ariadne wakes up as Eames reaches over her. You wrote that Yusuf and Eames moved to the dining room while she was sleeping, but then you say that all four of them were at the table. I got really confused as to who is sitting in what room and stuff. It's not a huge past of the plot, but it's distracting. Make sure that you have other people read your story before you post it. To you, the story makes sense because you thought it up, but when others read it, they may not see what you are describing.

Loved the innuendo at the end and the fact that Arthur listened to her talk in her sleep.

Write more!
h2ofan chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
awwww this was sooooo cute :) love arthur ariande stories
HalfwayFlawless chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Aw, that was sweet! Great job. :)
clois22 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
You're SO good at this! please write more aa stories! :)
Aiedail Choupette chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
This is lovely ;)
woofyy chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
lol, it was a bit ooc when arthur winked, then again in the movie i didnt expect him to tell adriadn to kiss him in the movie, so yeah ahaha ) cute. good luckies with your future stories
Arugula Pacioli chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I'm a little confused, did they get together or not? oh well, I still liked it:D
Electrical storm 1996 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
loved it xxxxxx
Kiluca1228 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
lmaoo nice oneshot
mmischiefmanaged chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Lovely so far!
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Nice, I liked the mix of dreams and reality. Not to mention the little twist of realizing which were which.

Thanks for posting.:)

-Ellie
sadiebird chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
more, please!
minimi37818 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
That actually made me laugh out loud, especially at the end :) Greeat job! 3JG-L3
SneakerToose chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
great story- it captured them perfectly.
Voldemort's Spawn chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
AH! FLuffyness. I heart the flufflyness. Wonderfully done. ) Oh and thanks for the story fav. I is very glad you like it.
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