I loved it

Intriguing. ... But highly disturbing.

This is so twisted I love it! So well written you have real talent here it shows

Hello

Whom ever finds this disgusting is stupid for even reading this or clicking on it, seriously? Why the fuck would you comment your complete idiocy on this page of you find it revolting.

Oof! Mah dude! Oof!

not sure if I liked the erotic parts. Like that should definitely not be associated with a mother/daughter relationship but damn this was harsh

I don't get it. I-i'm sorry but just, I just don't get it. Can you make another chapter about Coraline staying with the Beldam or escaping? Because this just reminds me of mothers punishing daughters. Except, this is more aggressive and violent. Can you make another chapter explaining more?

No

Wow i love your writing. You're so good at mixing a both loving and sensual situation with the sadistic and cruelty of the beldam. This is quite erotic. yet it feels natural. You really have a good grip on the Beldam if you ask me. I am mortified that the story ends here x.x I hope you pick this up again if you happen to rewatch coraline and get re inspired.

I don't know why but the last chapter unwillingly made tears come to my eyes. Wow.

NOOOO Y U LEMON WRITERS STOP AT THE CHAPTERS WHERE IT BEGINS TO BE AN ACTUAL FANFICTION!
I would recommend developing this Other Mother's character and how she might just actually truly care about Coraline as a daughter, even if she doesn't recognizes it. That would be a very good twist

This was intense damn

I don't get whipped but that kind of sounds like a very intense version of what my mom would do

Someone tell me why I read this.