Somehow this chapter seems to remind me of the two major American political parties. Arceus, I really hate election year. People and the Media are annoying as hell around that time and it's worse now that I am old enough to vote. Oh well, at least this chapter was a good read.

Reshiram had far better stabs and a better movepool than Zekrom. It's typing also helps against the new Fairy type. That said, Zekrom is better for a simple but incredibly important reason: It looks cooler.

Summoning a legendary to get rid of your enemies sounds amazing, but its not like they have full control over it... I can see why Tornadus is always mistaken to miss the intended targets.

Reminds me of a story where an avatar of a powerful warrior/wizard/whatever from a thousand years prior was used as a guardian, only allowing those in pursuit of "good" to pass. Unfortunately, while he was human, he was from over a thousand years prior and had a very different definition of "good".

Well, this was certainly unexpected. Since the Swords of Justice are seen as a trio of human-despising demigods (and for a good reason too) it was quite the change when you showed them as a group that walked along the grey line and protected both humans and Pokemon alike from greater evils.

But ultimately it's inevitable. As humanity expands their lands, their desires of corruption and greed grow with them. It's inherent in our blood.

wow, 640 huh? your almost about to catch up.

Even with their dislike of humans, it's good to see the Swords still standing up for the innocent ones so they can deliver justice. I really like the ideas behind the Swords.

Man I loved using Terrakion. Good as a double-dancer with awesome stabs that let him pretty much do what he wanted with his other two moves. I might not be interested in the rest of the musketeers but stab Close Combat and Stone Edge with that kind of attack and speed is ridiculous. Only thing I really wish for is a better ability. I don't see much point in Justified unless it's on Lucario or Cobalion since both can switch in on any dark attack ever (in Gen V anyway).

You had several instances of no spacing between words.

Interesting, but somehow I think it's too similar to the Victini entry, but since Victini's role is diferent than Volcaronae's.

Ahah, Larvesta being from the sun is actually awesome. If some species came from the moon, it's possible for heat tolerant Pokemon to come from a giant burning star.

I imagine a B-movie: LARVESTAS FROM OUTER SPACE! Granted Larverstas are so gentle Pokémon.

Now there was the mother of all pain in the asses to raise. Volcarona is easily one of my favorite pokemon ever, and possibly my favorite from Gen V but crap oh crap was it annoying to raise. Though I was glad it could learn Giga Drain in B2/W2, great for it's horrendous rock weakness.

Once swept almost all of Alder's team with an Emboar. Only thing I didn't one-shot with Emboar was Druddigon, which I one-shotted with Haxorus.

I loved this one! I like how you took Hydreigon's destructive nature and put a reason behind it. Good stuff!

Love the touch with the reference to PMD: Gates of Infinity. The Voice of Life was quite an interesting character.