|Reviews for Publishing Private Thoughts|
| Angels-heart1 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Very nice. Loved the story.
|Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 10/4/2010|
| kisswithafist10 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
It seems a bit rushed. Why would Hermione tell a ex-teacher, and a rather unpleasant one, such private information about her love life? And their sudden tea date came out of nowhere, it seemed. It's a nice concept, but I think you should flesh it out a bit. An inner debate for Hermione when she realizes her cherished poet is in fact her former teacher would probably be realistic. And we've got no reason to believe Snape would be interested in her, either.
It's a bit difficult for me to imagine that Snape would publish his private thoughts, (hehe), being such a introverted person, but whatever. War changes people.
Nice story, all in all :) keep writing! Sorry if I sounded harsh.
| GreenEyedRedHead1994 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I liked this a lot. lol, 'know it all.' The poem was perfect. Did you write it?