|Reviews for Under The Stars|
| Band10hut chapter 1 . 4/26
Wingapo! I love this story and the simple moral you put at the end of it. And thanks for your support in writing the Pearl Maiden. I am writing another chapter right now.
To answer your questions:
1. In the next chapter, John will be fifteen, going on sixteen. by the story's end, I plan to make him seventeen. nad there might be an epilogue.
2. I will have several tributes and references to Pocahontas. However, this is his backstory, like a prequel. But I plan to write other stories about him and Pocahontas later on.
Thanks. Gracias. Shei shei.
| Jyoti chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Wonderful job! I just love reading your stories. This gives us a closer look into what Nakoma's thoughts could have been.
| CooLibrarian chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Very good, its as if you are almost there
| babyb26 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Absolutely wonderful glad your writing again. Great fic from a different perspective. -nikki
| HC247 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I loved this. I like how you had John pick up on the fact that nakoma harbored feelings for Kokoum and just the scene between them in general. The whole thign felt like it could have been a missing scene from the movie.
Great job here! I really enjoyed this :)
| An Unknown Foreign Beauty chapter 1 . 7/22/2010