|Reviews for Shrimp Paella|
| Puddycat chapter 21 . 12/2/2013
I love these ficlets! And personally, I think the foot massage one is exactly why you SHOULD write romance. There's far too much soppiness in most EdWin fics, they need more adorable goofiness like that XD
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/4/2013
Yay! You didn't name their kids after dead people! You actually came up with names yourself! Thank the gods…
| lotrprincess chapter 20 . 5/26/2013
That's a good point. The anime never mentions how they knew the brothers were Hohenheim's sons. Or that they would do the same thing he did. Poor Elrics. They were doomed before they were even born by the sins of their father to be involved with the Homunculi. I wonder, though, did Hohenheim perform human transmutation before or after he and Dante made the Philosopher's Stone? If before, why does Envy's true form look like Hohenheim's last body? If after, why is he not missing any body parts?
| lotrprincess chapter 19 . 12/17/2012
There's so much emphasis put on the relationship between Envy and the Elric family, that I have seriously NEVER considered Dante's feelings toward him. Great villain perspective.
| RedKetchup chapter 19 . 10/29/2012
Ooh, interesting with preferences on Dante's part. Of course it is not favoritism, or that he wears the deceased son's face. Of course not ;P
| iNuQTpIe chapter 18 . 10/4/2012
That was ADORABLE! :D
| RedKetchup chapter 17 . 10/3/2012
Well, chapter 17 and 18 gave me enough cuteness for the next lifetime. Now excuse me while i go die by "Adorable overdose."
| Rocky Oberlin chapter 18 . 10/3/2012
I'm surprised that they didn't say "Ewww" when they watched their parents kiss. That was pretty calm of them to look for a new princess. The whole clip was cute though. It's sweet to see Ed playing with his children. I thought it was interesting that his daughter said that she was an archer. It seems that she would be just as much a spitfire as her dad.
| iNuQTpIe chapter 16 . 9/23/2012
That one was adorable X)
| Sonar chapter 16 . 9/10/2012
It's not bad. Still, you got to remember that Falman remembers alot of things as well.
| RedKetchup chapter 16 . 9/9/2012
| lotrprincess chapter 15 . 8/3/2012
Lovelovelovelovelovelove! I think the best part of your stories (besides your great sense of humor) is that your characterization is spot-on for EVERY character. In retrospect, that attribute is actually what makes them so funny in the first place.
| Pocket Quasar chapter 15 . 5/16/2012
HAHAHAHAH! Roy is so bad! I love how he makes Elicia give it to Maes. So cute!
| Pocket Quasar chapter 14 . 3/10/2012
Aw, the poor men! The Elric clan is a great handful!
But I must say, I love the concept of Heinkel and Darius being 'tortured' by the Elric children. That's just too cute!
| Pocket Quasar chapter 13 . 2/22/2012
These are so amazing. I love how you vary between humour to solemn. It's such a nice mix. Keep up the awesome work!