|Reviews for Superstition|
| detectivejigsaw chapter 1 . 5/5
I'm interested, if you ever take this up again. I like how you keep everyone in character, and add just the right touch of humor.
| fanastikal chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
I really like this; it has a lot of potential and sweet moments. It's really too bad that you seem to have given up on it. If you ever continue, I'll be sure and read it.
| thesunwillshineclear chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
That was really interesting, and I hope you continue!
| readingisawsome chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Is Dave going to be ok? Update soon!
| Arlothia chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Very mysterious! I hope we lean more about Magnus. He sounds interesting. Oooh... I wonder who is hexing Dave. The cat, salt, candle...hmmmmm. Update soon! Keep it up!
| S.K chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Pretty good story! Please continue it, I'd love to read more.
| Jaselin chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
This is looks like a fun story. I like the way you write Dave and Becky.
I can't wait to see Balthazar's reaction to Dave's string of bad luck. :)
| Bane WolfBlood chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Really good please update soon!
| LaylaBinx chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Eeek! Poor Dave!
| Kaytori chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Are those boxers with pi on them?
HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA Oh that was great nice work, can't wait to see what else you got in store.
| TTCyclone chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Awesome so far! Love it!
| davefan chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
wow! great story! i wonder what else will happen to dave! im so excited!
| ShadowBallad chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Yes, another SA fanfic! :)
I really like the premise of the story. Poor Dave already has such sorry, luck; getting an even worse sort of it can't make for a happy life! :) The little blurb with Veronia and Balthazar was very sweet; made me smile. :) I can't help but wonder what she'd think of the 21st century and all its wonders after having been locked in the grimhold for centuries. I don't mean to write your story for you, but I think it would be fun and cute to have her being confused and frightened at certain things, like television and airplanes, and having Balthazar explain them. Just a suggestion. :)
Anyway, I look forward to more updates. A quick note though - sometimes the prose shifts from past into present tense; just an FYI for continuity's sake from a nit-picky English major. :)
| Dark Horse Writer chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Good story so far! I hope you update soon!
| analinda chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Oh, yeah. More. Please more.