Reviews for Red
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 11/5/2015
You had me goin' for a minute thinkin' Jake was gonna be the soul mate in this fic! Thank goodness Edward was lurkin' in the background waitin' for his chance LOL!
debslmac chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Loved this:)
KazM77 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Well written, an enjoyable read.
MyEdwardJacob chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I loved this one shot. I wish for more, but this is great! I loved how we didn't know who the man was, but I felt it had to be Edward. There was so much that could have been anyone, but still. This was beautiful.
Isao84 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Aw! "It was never a choice" i'm a sucker for that kimd of love.
Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Wow. That was lovely!
Melolabel chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Very interesting spin on the choice Bella made. Enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing it!
shaqbarcalis chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
that was fantastic! I loved every second of it!
dani7603 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
im glad u decided to write thisit was amzing

and shes right she never had achoice in the matter
halconmia chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Great great story, I am just sad its a one shot. I have read a few of you stories and it never ceases to amaze me just how well you write. You could feel Bella's pain at the choices she had to make. And Edwards for causing her to have to make those choices. But as it is with those two they belong together and don't really have the choice of staying apart. Wonderful story!
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
WOW! That was really beautiful and intense... I liked the format and the way you really didn't know at first who it was going to be (well, I always assume she'll choose Edward because I would!). Interesting twist on canon, and for me it's an HEA too! Great job for a worthy cause. Thanks for sharing!
Pochacco906 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Great job! It's so different reading from a third person POV but you both did a great job with it! I liked the end and how it was never a choice for Bella because it for sure isn't! LOL ...

I also liked that you threw in that Edward is a vamp without really saying it and that she gave up everything to be with him.

So sweet!
orlibluver chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
It was so sad yet so beautifully written. I kept going back and forth with who she was going to choose, thankfully I got it right in the end. Glad to read another one of your stories. Can't wait to see what comes next.
swimom7 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
WOW girls - Awesome. Really - you totally had me all confused and shivery. LOVE IT.
Mary Alice 7 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Loved it, really well written! One of the best one shots I've read in a long time! Could easily keep this going, js!