Reviews for Neophyte and Neurotic
Silvermane1 chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
cool
Aian Omoi chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
Ending this is a sin. I want you to know that you're putting your soul in jeopardy. :)
lil joker 1989 chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
OMG Harry is thirty... how old is Jacob?
x.X.x.Nefarious.x.X.x chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
Buahahaha!

I don't know why I wrote that.

Well, anyway, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.

SO MUCH.

SOOOOOO MUUUUUCCCHHHH!

I can't believe you're going set this baby free, even though it's a good thing...

-Sigh-

You're going to have to get another super-long one that I can follow...
IchigoPudding chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
Hahaa cute! :D
Aisucold chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I love your writing style! great story
Lientjuhh chapter 27 . 10/3/2010
I like it.. Well done.. :)
Shura Magami chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
Well, there goes my hope for mpreg scene *lol*. Love the dinamic between Harry and Jacob. They're starting to act like old married couple. So cute. Usually, other fanfickers failed in these 'filler-like' chapters, where the calm after the storm started. But you pull it nicely. Love it.

Yes, sex in bathroom or bathtub are dangerous. Please don't try this at home! *lol*

Happy Birthday Harry! Where the birthday sex scene? *lol* Well, since they're still a few guests I guess that's too crash XD.
PhoenixfromtheFlame chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
Awwww the Babies almost ready to stand on its own :)

I've been watching it grow, so many happy memories :)

Thanks so much for updating :)
Katsy17 chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
loved this chapter
shadowinRW chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
I'd protest the cutting of the umbillical cord, but I know that you're going to start a new and exciting story afterwards. The only problem is that I'll have to wait for togther part of the romance, but that's ok.

And your vampire was creepy! Creeeeeeeeeeepy. Poor Harry.

But letting Harry be babied was reall adorable. Seriously, I almost cooed.
Kyuubi no Goddess chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
Great job! Though I could have done without the metaphor, lol!

Kyuu out!
Beth5572 chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
daemonkieran chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
I loved your use of hausfrau. Harry as one makes me laugh.
ChocoholicWriter chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
You had Harry's birthday party on July 30 when his birthday's on July 31
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